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A large tree grows just near your house, producing troubles for you. Write a letter to local authority explaining this problem, discuss the ways of its resolution and make inquiries about the financial aspect.

A large tree grows just near your house, producing troubles for you. Write a letter to local authority explaining this problem, discuss the ways of its resolution and make inquiries about the financial aspect. yDmRD
Dear Mr. Brown, I am Daniel Smith, living in greenland colony for two decades. I am writing to bring your attention to the fact that a large tree grows just near my house causing a problem. A large tree that grows has large trucks facing towards my balcony, occupied half of the area and also causing car parking, as I cannot park my car. I have to park it on the other side of the road which creating a traffic jam. I believe that there is no the option to cut down down the tree. However, it's a tough job and cannot done my workers. We required machinery and other equipment. I am also curious to know about the expenses required to cut down because it a huge tree and can fall on my roof or can damage the road on the other side. Will the council help me in financial or I have to pay from my pocket. Kindly take a notice of this and please help me as soon as possible. Looking forward to hearing from you. Your sincerely.
Dear Mr. Brown,

I am Daniel Smith, living in
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colony for two decades. I am writing to bring your attention to the fact that a large
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causing a problem.

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that grows has large trucks facing towards my balcony, occupied half of the area and
also
causing car parking, as I cannot park my car. I
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park it on the other side of the road which creating a traffic jam.

I believe that there is
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no
the option to
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down down
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tree
.
However
, it's a tough job and cannot done my workers. We required machinery and other equipment. I am
also
curious to know about the expenses required to
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cut
down
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because
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it
a huge
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and can fall on my roof or can damage the road on the other side. Will the council
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help
me in financial or I
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have to
pay from my pocket.

Kindly take a notice of this and
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please
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help
me as
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as possible. Looking forward to hearing from you.

Your
sincerely
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IELTS letter A large tree grows just near your house, producing troubles for you. Write a letter to local authority explaining this problem, discuss the ways of its resolution and make inquiries about the financial aspect.

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181 words
6.0
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Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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