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Write a letter to a colleague who is coming from another country to attend a meeting at your office . The pick up arrangements you have made, The acomodation arrangements , the arrangement for the meeting

Write a letter to a colleague who is coming from another country to attend a meeting at your office. The pick up arrangements you have made, The acomodation arrangements, the arrangement for the meeting r6xgk
Respected Sir, I am Navpreet kaur, working in Delta Company as a Senior manager. I am writing this letter to apprise you about the arrangements of pick up from Airport and your stay. As you Know, I have already sent your tickets and travel information via E-mail. Probably, your flight will be landed near about 8: 00am on Friday. My office worker will stand near the departure terminal waiting for you with yellow ply card along with your name written on it. I already booked a hotel for you which is about 15 mile away from port but, close to meeting area. The Room is on the 4th floor and reserved with company’s name. To add on, the bedroom have huge balcony with ample space. I hope you would like the ambience of hotel. A cab will pick up you from the point and drop out in the front of 2nd building of our Premises. Moreover, other foreign delegates will be there. Furthermore, I have planned a short trip for you to show you around the sight seeing places of city. Hope to meet at meeting soon. Your’s Faithfully
Respected Sir, I am
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Navpreet
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kaur
, working in Delta
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Company
as a Senior manager. I am writing this letter to apprise you about the arrangements of pick up from Airport and your stay. As you Know, I have already
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
sent
your tickets and travel information via E-mail.
Probably
, your flight will
be landed
near about 8: 00am on Friday. My office worker will stand near the departure terminal waiting for you with yellow
ply
card along with your name written on it. I already booked a hotel for you which is about
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15 mile
away from port
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but
, close to meeting area. The Room is on the 4th floor and reserved with
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company
’s name. To
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add
on, the bedroom have huge balcony with ample space. I hope you would like the ambience of hotel. A cab will pick up you from the point and drop out in the front of 2nd building of our Premises.
Moreover
, other foreign delegates will be there.
Furthermore
, I have planned a short trip for you to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
show
you around the sight seeing places of city. Hope to
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meet
at meeting
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soon
.
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Your’s
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Faithfully
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IELTS letter Write a letter to a colleague who is coming from another country to attend a meeting at your office. The pick up arrangements you have made, The acomodation arrangements, the arrangement for the meeting

Letter
  American English
1 paragraphs
188 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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Task Achievement: 5.0
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