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Dear Sir, I am writing this letter to request to you about withdrawal two courses: Environment Study (EVC320) and Grammar (GRM223). I dropped both courses due to I did not manage these with my part-time job. I did not left my job due to financial crisis at my home. So I take a decision of left these courses from my conscious mind. If you allow me then I will be complete these courses in summer semester and within time of my degree. Please inform me, if my paid amount of courses can refund either full or partial as per refund policy and I think I am not too late to inform this. So please inform me on my email id- malkeet28192@gmail. com. I will be grateful of you. I look forward to hearing from you. Yours faithfully, Malkeet Singh
Dear Sir,

I am writing this letter to request to you about withdrawal two
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courses
: Environment Study (EVC320) and Grammar (GRM223).

I dropped both
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
courses
due to I did not manage these with my part-time job.
Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
I
did not
After the auxiliary verb 'do', use the base form of a verb. Did you mean "leave"?
left
my job due to financial crisis at my home.
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So
I take a decision of
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
left
these
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
courses
from my conscious mind. If you
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
allow
me then I will be complete these
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
courses
in summer semester and within time of my degree.

This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
Please
inform me, if my paid amount of
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
courses
can refund either full or partial as per refund policy and I
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
think
I am not too late to inform this.
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
So
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
please
inform me on my email id- malkeet28192@gmail.
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com
.

I will be grateful of you. I look forward to hearing from you.

Yours
faithfully
,

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Malkeet
Singh
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IELTS letter about withdrawal two courses

Letter
  American English
7 paragraphs
138 words
This writing has been penalized,
text can't be
less than 250 words in Task 2
and less than 150 words in Task 1
5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 6.0
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Grammatical Range: 6.0
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Task Achievement: 5.0
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