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advising a friend to find a job or go to college

advising a friend to find a job or go to college m9n5K

Dear Tom, I am writing in response to your request for advice to help you choose between finding a job and going to college. As you know, in the city you live, there are not famous universities and they are not the ones that prepare you for getting a job. On the other side, I know that you are not enthusiastic about doing research and applying for academic positions in the future, so in my opinion, college won’t be enjoyable for you at all. Considering your personal characteristics, you are a boy who loves using different tools. So if you want to work with different utilities, you should learn them. This means that you need to spend hours and hours taking part in different courses. In my opinion, the most suitable jobs for you are IT based jobs. Jobs like being a code developer or acting as a digital marketer are the jobs I recommend you to apply for. I hope what I said helps you in making the best decision. Please feel free to let me know if you require any further information. Best wishes, Amir

Dear Tom,

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help
 you choose between finding a You use this word too often, consider replacing it withtaskappointmentofficebusinesscareerassignment
job
 and going to college.

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live
, there are not This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:well-known
famous
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 they are not the ones that prepare you for getting a You use this word too often, consider replacing it withtaskappointmentofficebusinesscareerassignment
job
. On the other side, I know that you are not enthusiastic about doing research and applying for academic positions in the future, This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:consequently
so
 in my opinion, college won’t be enjoyable for you at all.

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loves
 using This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:various
different
 tools. This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:consequently
So
 if you want to work with This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:various
different
 utilities, you should learn them. This means that you need to spend hours and hours taking part in This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:various
different
 courses.

In my opinion, the most suitable You use this word too often, consider replacing it withtaskappointmentofficebusinesscareerassignment
jobs
 for you are IT based You use this word too often, consider replacing it withtaskappointmentofficebusinesscareerassignment
jobs
. You use this word too often, consider replacing it withtaskappointmentofficebusinesscareerassignment
Jobs
 like being a code developer or acting as a digital marketer are the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withtaskappointmentofficebusinesscareerassignment
jobs
 I recommend you to apply for.

I hope what I said This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :assists
helps
 you in making the best decision. This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :satisfy
Please
 feel free to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :authorize
let
 me know if you require any further
 information.

Best wishes,

Amir