Search
Vocabularying
Listening
Reading
1. Academic
2. General
Writing
1. IELTSWriting Checker
2. IELTS Writing Samples
Speaking

Do you want to improve your writing? Try our new evaluation service and get detailed feedback.

My friend visiting my region

My friend visiting my region nE5Po

Dear Louis, I came to know about your visit to my place through an email. First of all, I am pleased to see you coming to my region. This would be fun! I would like to give some piece of advice about what you should do when you first arrive here. You don’t have to worry about the accommodation, you can stay with me. Besides, you should bring some warm clothes because it’s pretty cool here these days, and don’t forget to bring your boots, as it snows a lot here. Since you are going to live here for two weeks, I have some pretty good places to explore. Like, the museum of ancient art, the robber’s cave, etc. Mostly people know English here but if you can learn some Kashmiri then it would be easier. You can explore good local dessert and some street food as well. I’m looking forward to seeing you soon and explore exotic outlooks with me. I’m sure you will enjoy my company very much. Love Yours Avneesh.

Dear Louis,

I came to know about your visit to my place through an email. This phrase is redundant. Consider using "first".First
First of all
, I am This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :satisfied
pleased
 to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :witness
see
 you coming to my region. This would be fun!

I would like to give This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a number of
some
 piece of advice about what you should do when you first
 arrive here. You don’t This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:ought to
have to
 worry about the accommodation, you can stay with me. Besides
, you should bring This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a number of
some
 warm clothes This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:due to the factin light of the fact thatowing to the fact that
because
 it’s pretty cool here these days, and don’t forget to bring your boots, as it snows a lot here. Since you are going to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :reside
live
 here for two weeks, I have This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a number of
some
 pretty This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :beneficialproduct
good
 places to explore. Like, the museum of ancient art, the robber’s cave, etc. Mostly
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :individualsnationsociety
people
 know English here This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
but
 if you can learn This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a number of
some
Possible spelling mistake found.KashmirKashmirsKashmir i
Kashmiri
 then it would be easier. You can explore This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :beneficialproduct
good
 local dessert and This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a number of
some
 street food as well
.

I’m looking forward to seeing you This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:in the near future
soon
 and explore exotic outlooks with me. I’m sure you will enjoy my This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :enterprisecorporation
company
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:extremelyimmenselysupremelysuperb
very
 much.

This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :admireadore
Love


Yours Possible spelling mistake found.AgreesAvenuesKneesAgnesAndesAverse
Avneesh
. 