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This is a part of an email you have received from your Australian friend, Toni. • • I’ve been feeling a bit ill for a few weeks. Nothing serious but I’ve had a couple of colds and an annoying cough. My doctor says I’m ok and that I’m just working too hard. What do you think I should do to get better? Do you think should I take some time off college, or try out some kind of alternative medicine? What would you do, if you were me? Bye Toni

This is a part of an email you have received from your Australian friend, Toni. • • I’ve been feeling a bit ill for a few weeks. Nothing serious but I’ve had a couple of colds and an annoying cough. My doctor says I’m ok and that I’m just working too hard. What do you think I should do to get better? Do you think should I take some time off college, or try out some kind of alternative medicine? What would you do, if you were me? Bye Toni 1o9K7

Hey Toni, Sorry for hearing that, I wish you to get better as soon as possible. These days I heard about many people who tried alternative medicine and it becomes very popular because it's effective, no chemical and has no side effects. Actually, I have tried it many times ago when I have got flu or cold but the most thing that I liked the fact that it is natural like if it does not benefit you, it will not harm you. So that, I advise you to try the alternative medicine rather than take some time off college especially that your doctor said that you’re ok and it is normal and the case of this feeling that you have had a couple of colds before but there are no worries! I think if you took some time off your college you will miss a lot of lessons and it will be too hard especially that your exam is in the next week. I think if you drank warm ginger tea and had enough sleep you will feel better and you know that ginger works very well with colds. But in the end, I want to tell you that no one can feel your situation so that you know yourself and your health. Don’t forget to check your body’s temperature and keep yourself warm to make sure that everything is alright. Take care and don’t forget to inform me about your decision. Bye

Hey Toni,

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Bye