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A large company in your area has decided to spend a certain amount of money, either to sponsor a local children’s sports team for two years, or to pay for two open-air concerts. It has asked for feedback from the general public. Write a letter to the company. In your letter,describe the benefits of sponsoring the sports team summarise the benefits of paying for the concerts say how you think the company should spend the money

A large company in your area has decided to spend a certain amount of money, either to sponsor a local children’s sports team for two years, or to pay for two open-air concerts. It has asked for feedback from the general public. Write a letter to the company. In your letter, describe the benefits of sponsoring the sports team summarise the benefits of paying for the concerts say how you think the company should spend the money wlxl

Dear Sir or Madam, I would profoundly like to thank you for your decision in spending money for the benefits of the local people. It feels amazing as you have asked the local people for the suggestions and hence I would like to offer some inputs that may help you to decide the way in which you wish to spend the money. As you are aware, that cricket has been running in the blood of people of this neighbourhood. The kids in this locality have set up their own team and are competing in local tournaments, however, they are always on the losing side because of the lack of proper training equipment, but, this never shakes their confidence in those. If you sponsor the local team, they would get the required encouragement and would be competing more fiercely in the upcoming matches. Having their team succeed in the games, the other people would too get into the game and we may start competing at a national level, On the other hand, having your sponsorship on a team would enhance your brand value too and you would be recognized more in the locality. On the other hand, arranging two open-air concerts is also a great idea as people will immensely enjoy the performance and some local bands would get the chance to show their talents. It certainly will promote our culture and heritage. I am positive either of your initiatives will serve our community greatly. However, supporting the local sports team has a more eminent result than escalating the music fans by sponsoring concerts, I believe. Concerts would be temporary entertainments for the local people, but provision for the young sportsmen will be remembered for a long and would give us many occasions to celebrate and be proud of. Once again thank you for a commendable initiative. Yours faithfully, Edward Jenkins

Dear Sir or Madam,

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. However
, supporting the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withprovincialregional
local
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team
 has a more eminent result than escalating the music fans by sponsoring concerts, I believe. Concerts would be temporary entertainments for the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withprovincialregional
local
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Once again thank you for a commendable initiative.

Yours faithfully
,

Edward Jenkins