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A item of clothing you purchased but found some issues with it once you returned home. Write a letter to the manager of the shop. In the letter, you should say: what the item was what were the issues and what you expect the store manager to do.

A item of clothing you purchased but found some issues with it once you returned home. Write a letter to the manager of the shop. In the letter, you should say: what the item was what were the issues and what you expect the store manager to do. Y2Vrm
Dear Sir/Madam, I am writing this letter to complain about a number of issues regarding the clothes I bought from your boutique. My name is James Jude and I have been patronizing your business for the past 12 months without problems however, yesterday, July 3, 2021, I purchased a nice looking pair of jeans trouser and T-shirt from your store, unfortunately, they were not ideal for me. The pair of jeans had size: waist 36, length 43, written on it, however, when I got home and tried it, I discovered that it was extremely small for me which shows the size displayed was incorrect and the T-shirt it was oversized, therefore, they are ill-suited for me. Consequently, as a solution, I was wondering if you could change the trouser which is 34 in size with that of 36 and pertaining to the T-shirt, I will appreciate it if you can amend the size or give me another one in liue of it. I hope you would consider my suggestion and, I look forward to hearing from you in the near future. Yours faithfully, James Jude.
Dear Sir/Madam,

I am writing this letter to complain about a number of issues regarding the clothes I
bought
from your boutique.

My name is James Jude and I have been patronizing your business for the past 12 months without problems
however
, yesterday, July 3, 2021, I
purchased
a nice looking pair of jeans trouser and T-shirt from your store, unfortunately, they were not ideal for me.

The pair of jeans had
size
: waist 36, length 43, written on it,
however
, when I
got
home and tried it, I discovered that it was
extremely
small
for me which
shows
the
size
displayed was incorrect and the T-shirt it
was oversized
,
therefore
, they are ill-suited for me.

Consequently
, as a solution, I was wondering if you could
change
the trouser which is 34 in
size
with that of 36 and pertaining to the T-shirt, I will appreciate it if you can amend the
size
or give me another one in
liue
of it.

I hope you would consider my suggestion and, I look forward to hearing from you in the near future.

Yours
faithfully
,

James Jude.
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IELTS letter A item of clothing you purchased but found some issues with it once you returned home. Write a letter to the manager of the shop. In the letter, you should say: what the item was what were the issues and what you expect the store manager to do.

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  American English
8 paragraphs
185 words
6.0
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Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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Task Achievement: 5.5
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