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You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. A friend you met last year has invited you to visit him/her in his/her country. You have never been there before and need some information before you leave. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter: request advise about a gift for his/her family ask about activities and clothing in his/her country find out about the food You do NOT need to write any address. You should write at least 150 words.You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. A friend you met last year has invited you to visit him/her in his/her country. You have never been there before and need some information before you leave. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter: request advise about a gift for his/her family ask about activities and clothing in his/her country find out about the food You do NOT need to write any address. You should write at least 150 words.You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. A friend you met last year has invit

Hello my friend, Hope you find this letter in good health and spirits. I Write this letter to you for know about some things because you were invited me in your country. consequently, I need some advises about which gift i bought for your family, in the facts i don't know about the choice of you and your family. I am unconsciousness to you country culture and celebration. I have a another advise that i asked to you. I am unaware the weather condition of your country, cooled or warmed. If you suggest me which type of cloths and other activities that i can bring it with me. because I should do shopping for my trip, so it is easy for me for buy a cloth. And the last one i want to know about the food type. Is the halal food available in your country. ? Because Muslims can't eat thing that is not a halal. consequently, please tell me food quality for Muslims. I will appreciate to you if gave me the right suggestion for my trip in your country. Thank you.

Hello my friend,

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good
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some
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because
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. This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter.Consequently
consequently
, I need This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a number of
some
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bought
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country
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a
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advise
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i
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asked to
 you. Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.Furthermore, ILikewise, INot only that, but I
I
 am unaware the weather condition of your You use this word too often, consider replacing it withrusticbucolichomeyagrarianprovincial
country
, cooled or warmed. If you suggest me which type of cloths and other activities that Did you mean “I”?I
i
 can bring it with me. This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:due to the factin light of the fact thatowing to the fact that
because
 I should The usual collocation for an activity ending in “-ing” is “go”, not “do” or “play”.go shopping
do shopping
 for my trip, This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:consequently
so
 it is easy for me for This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :purchase
buy
 a cloth. And the last one Is this the personal pronoun “I”? It is spelled uppercase.I
i
 want to know about the food type. Is the halal food available in your You use this word too often, consider replacing it withrusticbucolichomeyagrarianprovincial
country
. ? “Because” at the beginning of a sentence usually requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
Because
 Muslims can't eat thing that is
 not a halal. This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter.Consequently
consequently
, This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :satisfy
please
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :inform
tell
 me food quality for Muslims. I will appreciate to you if gave me the right suggestion for my trip in your You use this word too often, consider replacing it withrusticbucolichomeyagrarianprovincial
country
. Thank you. 