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You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. A friend you met last year has invited you to visit him/her in his/her country. You have never been there before and need some information before you leave. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter: request advise about a gift for his/her family ask about activities and clothing in his/her country find out about the food You do NOT need to write any address. You should write at least 150 words.You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. A friend you met last year has invited you to visit him/her in his/her country. You have never been there before and need some information before you leave. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter: request advise about a gift for his/her family ask about activities and clothing in his/her country find out about the food You do NOT need to write any address. You should write at least 150 words.You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. A friend you met last year has invit

Hello my friend, Hope you find this letter in good health and spirits. I Write this letter to you for know about some things because you were invited me in your country. consequently, I need some advises about which gift i bought for your family, in the facts i don't know about the choice of you and your family. I am unconsciousness to you country culture and celebration. I have a another advise that i asked to you. I am unaware the weather condition of your country, cooled or warmed. If you suggest me which type of cloths and other activities that i can bring it with me. because I should do shopping for my trip, so it is easy for me for buy a cloth. And the last one i want to know about the food type. Is the halal food available in your country. ? Because Muslims can't eat thing that is not a halal. consequently, please tell me food quality for Muslims. I will appreciate to you if gave me the right suggestion for my trip in your country. Thank you.
Hello my friend,

Hope you find this letter in
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good
health and spirits. I Write this letter to you for know about
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some
things
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because
you
were invited
me in your
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
country
.
This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter.
consequently
, I need
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some
advises about which gift
Is this the personal pronoun “I”? It is spelled uppercase.
i
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
bought
for your family, in the facts
Is this the personal pronoun “I”? It is spelled uppercase.
i
don't know about the choice of you and your family. I am unconsciousness to you
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
country
culture and celebration. I have
Use “an” instead of ‘a’ if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. ‘an article’, ‘an hour’.
a
another
Did you mean “advice” (noun)?
advise
that
Is this the personal pronoun “I”? It is spelled uppercase.
i
This looks like a collocation error. You do not need a preposition after “asked”.
asked to
you.
Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
I
am unaware the weather condition of your
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
country
, cooled or warmed. If you suggest me which type of cloths and other activities that
Did you mean “I”?
i
can bring it with me.
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
because
I should
The usual collocation for an activity ending in “-ing” is “go”, not “do” or “play”.
do shopping
for my trip,
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
so
it is easy for me for
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buy
a cloth. And the last one
Is this the personal pronoun “I”? It is spelled uppercase.
i
want to know about the food type. Is the halal food available in your
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
country
. ?
“Because” at the beginning of a sentence usually requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
Because
Muslims can't eat thing
that is
not a halal.
This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter.
consequently
,
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
please
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
tell
me food quality for Muslims. I will appreciate to you if gave me the right suggestion for my trip in your
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
country
. Thank you.

IELTS letter A friend you met last year has invited you to visit him/her in his/her country. You have never been there before and need some information before you leave. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter: request advise about a gift for his/her family ask about activities and clothing in his/her country find out about the food You do NOT need to write any address. A friend you met last year has invited you to visit him/her in his/her country. You have never been there before and need some information before you leave. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter: request advise about a gift for his/her family ask about activities and clothing in his/her country find out about the food You do NOT need to write any address. A friend you met last year has invit

Letter
  American English
2 paragraphs
184 words
5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
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    Include an introduction and conclusion
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    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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  • You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. A friend you met last year has invited you to visit him/her in his/her country. You have never been there before and need some information before you leave. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter: request advise about a gift for his/her family ask about activities and clothing in his/her country find out about the food You do NOT need to write any address. You should write at least 150 words.You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. A friend you met last year has invited you to visit him/her in his/her country. You have never been there before and need some information before you leave. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter: request advise about a gift for his/her family ask about activities and clothing in his/her country find out about the food You do NOT need to write any address. You should write at least 150 words.You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. A friend you met last year has invit