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A friend you met last year has invited you to visit him/her in his/her country. You have never been there before and need some information before you leave. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter: request advise about a gift for his/her family ask about activities and clothing in his/her country find out about the food You do NOT need to write any address. You should write at least 150 words.

A friend you met last year has invited you to visit him/her in his/her country. You have never been there before and need some information before you leave. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter: request advise about a gift for his/her family ask about activities and clothing in his/her country find out about the food You do NOT need to write any address. W9Ya
Dear Sarah, I hope this letter finds you in radiant health and the best of spirits. I would like to thank you for inviting me to visit your house. I am writing this in order to know about your choice and your city. I am a little confuse about what should I bring with me because, I am totally unaware about the weather of your place and I also want to get some idea about presents that I would like to get for you and your family. I do not even know, what kind of places we are going to visit when I will be there. Can you please suggest me, what sort of clothes should I bring with me. Also, advice me about the type of shoes that I should get with me. Additionally, as you know I am a vegetarian person consequently, tell me about the kind of food that I can bring with me for travel. I am quite excited to see you. I look forward to hearing from you. With regards, Shilpa
Dear Sarah,

I hope this letter finds you in radiant health and the best of spirits. I would like to thank you for inviting me to visit your
house
.
I
am writing this in order to know about your choice and your city.

I
am a
little
confuse about what should I bring with me
because
, I am
totally
unaware about the weather of your place and I
also
want to
get
some
idea
about presents that I would like to
get
for you and your family.
I
do not even know
, what
kind of places we are going to visit when I will be there. Can you
please
suggest me, what sort of clothes should I bring with me.
Also
, advice me about the type of shoes that I should
get
with me.

Additionally
, as you know I am a vegetarian person
consequently
,
tell
me about the kind of food that I can bring with me for travel. I am quite excited to
see
you.

I look forward to hearing from you.

With regards,

Shilpa
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IELTS letter A friend you met last year has invited you to visit him/her in his/her country. You have never been there before and need some information before you leave. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter: request advise about a gift for his/her family ask about activities and clothing in his/her country find out about the food You do NOT need to write any address.

Letter
  American English
7 paragraphs
175 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
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    Include an introduction and conclusion
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    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 6.0
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  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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