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A friend you met last year has invited you to visit him/her in his/her country. You have never been there before and need some information before you leave. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter: request advise about a gift for his/her family ask about activities and clothing in his/her country find out about the food You do NOT need to write any address. You should write at least 150 words.

A friend you met last year has invited you to visit him/her in his/her country. You have never been there before and need some information before you leave. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter: request advise about a gift for his/her family ask about activities and clothing in his/her country find out about the food You do NOT need to write any address. W9Ya

Dear Sarah, I hope this letter finds you in radiant health and the best of spirits. I would like to thank you for inviting me to visit your house. I am writing this in order to know about your choice and your city. I am a little confuse about what should I bring with me because, I am totally unaware about the weather of your place and I also want to get some idea about presents that I would like to get for you and your family. I do not even know, what kind of places we are going to visit when I will be there. Can you please suggest me, what sort of clothes should I bring with me. Also, advice me about the type of shoes that I should get with me. Additionally, as you know I am a vegetarian person consequently, tell me about the kind of food that I can bring with me for travel. I am quite excited to see you. I look forward to hearing from you. With regards, Shilpa

Dear Sarah,

I hope this letter finds you in radiant health and the best of spirits. I would like to thank you for inviting me to visit your This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :residence
house
. Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
I
 am writing this in order to know about your choice and your city.

Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
I
 am a This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:tiny
little
 confuse about what should I bring with me This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:due to the factin light of the fact thatowing to the fact that
because
, I am totally
 unaware about the weather of your place and I also
 want to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :acquire
get
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a number of
some
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :thoughtconceptnotion
idea
 about presents that I would like to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :acquire
get
 for you and your family. Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
I
 do not even knowIf " what" starts an indirect question, you do not need to put a comma before it. what
, what
 kind of places we are going to visit when I will be there. Can you This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :satisfy
please
 suggest me, what sort of clothes should I bring with me. Also
, advice me about the type of shoes that I should This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :acquire
get
 with me.

Additionally
, as you know I am a vegetarian person consequently
, This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :inform
tell
 me about the kind of food that I can bring with me for travel. I am quite excited to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :witness
see
 you.

I look forward to hearing from you.

With regards,

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