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A friend who is planning to visit you has asked you to describe the most interesting and enjoyable things to do in the community where you currently live. Write an email to your friend, telling them about these things. In your email, Say what these things are Say why they are interesting/enjoyable Suggest what you can do together

A friend who is planning to visit you has asked you to describe the most interesting and enjoyable things to do in the community where you currently live. Write an email to your friend, telling them about these things. In your email, Say what these things are Say why they are interesting/enjoyable Suggest what you can do together R2nnV

Dear Sarah, I am very excited that you are visiting. It has been so long that we’ve seen each other. The last was at our graduation ceremony and everything has been looking up for both of us since then. Which unfortunately has kept us away. I’m glad that this holiday season has given us the chance to catch up. While there are many different things that this area and its community offer, I have picked the things you would find more enjoyable. One is a pottery class arranged by the local community which offers to cover all basics and are even going to provide us all the materials needed. The other is a gardening activity that will take place in the neighborhood. We realized the lack of flowering plants and we’ve also decided to include the children. I remember you mentioned once about exploring the creativity in pottery while enhancing focus building skills. It would be great to explore it and spending time with children will be relaxing. Here’s the plan, we can do the class on the next morning and afternoon onwards to the gardening. Please get in touch with me to let me know if that sounds ok, and also your flight number. All the best, Devina

Dear Sarah,

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very
 excited that you are visiting. It has been This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:consequently
so
 long that we’ve This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :witnessed
seen
 each other. The last was at our graduation ceremony and everything has been looking up for both of us since then. “Which” at the beginning of a sentence usually requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
Which
 unfortunately has This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :retained
kept
 us away. I’m glad that this holiday season has This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :accorded
given
 us the chance to catch up.

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many
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different
 things that this area and its community offer, I have picked the things you would find more enjoyable. One is a pottery This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :coursetraining
class
 arranged by the local community which offers to cover all basics and are even going to provide us all the materials needed. The other is a gardening activity that will take place in the neighborhood. We realized the lack of flowering Use a comma before 'and' if it connects two independent clauses (unless they are closely connected and short).plants, and
plants and
 we’ve also
 decided to include the children.

I remember you mentioned once about exploring the creativity in pottery while enhancing focus building This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :proficiencies
skills
. It would be great to explore it and spending time with children will be relaxing. Here’s the plan, we can do the This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :coursetraining
class
 on the next
 morning and afternoon onwards to the gardening.

This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :satisfy
Please
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get
 in touch with me to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :authorize
let
 me know if that sounds ok, and also
 your flight number.

All the best,

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