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A friend of yours is thinking of going on a camping holiday for the first time this summer. He/she has asked for your advise. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter 1. Explain why you think your friend would enjoy a camping holiday 2. Describe some possible disadvantages 3. say whether you would like to go camping with your friend this summer

A friend of yours is thinking of going on a camping holiday for the first time this summer. He/she has asked for your advise. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter 1. Explain why you think your friend would enjoy a camping holiday 2. Describe some possible disadvantages 3. say whether you would like to go camping with your friend this summer r8K0J

Hello Sarah, I haven't seen you in a long time, hope you are doing well and I am excited after getting to know that you are going on a camping holiday this summer for the first time. I am all set to give some advise. Firstly, Camping is a wonderful idea and much needed break for all of us from our busy daily routine. Specifically, In summer most people would be interested in planning holiday and camping would be the first choice for many. In this way, you would get to meet people from various cultural backgrounds from the different parts of the country. It is a great opportunity to make new friends and for little adventures. Furthermore, you'd be delighted to watch the spectacular locations also don't forget to click some beautiful pictures. Although you will be enjoying the whole trip, ensure to take care of yourself in all the situations. Be prepared for the delays in the timings and late breakfasts or lunch as it will be difficult to manage everything on time with a bunch of people. In addition to this, carry your medicines and first aid box along with your bag packs. Lastly perhaps most importantly take care of your belongings because you may misplace them or can be lost while travelling. Above all, I would have loved to join you in this holiday trip but then my cousin's wedding is also at the same time so I had to attend that in the first place. Lots of love and best wishes to you. Don't forget to write me about your journey after the trip. Most of all, send me beautiful pictures of yours taken in the holiday. yours, Kate

Hello Sarah,

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, hope you are doing Use a comma before 'and' if it connects two independent clauses (unless they are closely connected and short).well, and
well and
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first
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time
. I am all set to give This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a number of
some
Did you mean "advice" (noun)?advice
advise
.

Firstly
, Camping is a wonderful This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :thoughtconceptnotion
idea
 and This word is normally spelled with hyphen.much-needed
much needed
 break for all of us from our busy daily routine. Specifically
, In summer most This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :individualsnationsociety
people
 would be interested
 in planning holiday and camping would be the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withearly
first
 choice for This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a plethora ofa number ofnumerous
many
. In this way, you would This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :acquire
get
 to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :attain
meet
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people
 from various cultural backgrounds from the This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:various
different
 parts of the country. It is a great opportunity to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :createconstructmanufactureproduce
make
 new friends and for This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:tiny
little
 adventures. Furthermore
, you'd be delighted
 to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :monitor
watch
 the spectacular locations also
 don't forget to click This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a number of
some
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :gorgeousstunning
beautiful
 pictures.

Although you will be enjoying the whole trip, ensure to take care of yourself in all the situations. Be prepared
 for the delays in the timings and late breakfasts or lunch as it will be difficult to manage everything on You use this word too often, consider replacing it withpointgenerationpastsecondturnspace
time
 with a bunch of This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :individualsnationsociety
people
. In addition
 to this, carry your medicines and You use this word too often, consider replacing it withearly
first
 aid box along with your bag packs. Lastly
 perhaps most importantly
 take care of your belongings This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:due to the factin light of the fact thatowing to the fact that
because
 you may misplace them or can be lost
 while travelling.

Above all
, I would have This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :admiredadored
loved
 to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :consolidatefuse
join
 you in this holiday trip This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
but
 then my cousin's wedding is also
 at the same You use this word too often, consider replacing it withpointgenerationpastsecondturnspace
time
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:consequently
so
 I had to attend that in the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withearly
first
 place. Lots of This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :admireadore
love
 and best wishes to you. Don't forget to write me about your journey after the trip. Most of all, This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :transmit
send
 me This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :gorgeousstunning
beautiful
 pictures of yours taken in the holiday.

This sentence does not start with an uppercase letterYours
yours
, Kate