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You recently did a short cookery course. The cookery school hsa asked foe your feedback on this course. Write a letter to your course director at the cookery school. In your letter. Describe what you enjoyed about thr course. Say how much cooking you have done since the couse . Suggest another cookery course you would like the school to offer.

You recently did a short cookery course. The cookery school hsa asked foe your feedback on this course. Write a letter to your course director at the cookery school. In your letter. Describe what you enjoyed about thr course. Say how much cooking you have done since the couse. Suggest another cookery course you would like the school to offer. XpdO
Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing this letter in response to the feedback that you have asked regarding the cookery course I have completed last Saturday. I would like to present my extreme gratitude towards the learning that your school has offered, while I thoroughly enjoyed the time enhancing my skills of cookibg North Indian and Chinese cuisines. The Chefs at your school inherent very high standards and they pass on same legacy to their students. After completing my course, I can now many dishes like buttrr chicken, tikka paneer etcetera, which is very appreciated by my family. Also, I have now planning to take orders for small kitty parties and Birthday parties. Your cookery school is very renowned and is valued very highin society. However, it would be great if you could start a course on bakery and Indian deserts. Waiting for your response. Yours Sincerely, Jagpreet
Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing this letter in response to the feedback that you have asked regarding the cookery course I have completed last Saturday.

I would like to present my extreme gratitude towards the learning that your school has offered, while I
thoroughly
enjoyed the time enhancing my
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skills
of
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cookibg
North Indian and Chinese cuisines. The Chefs at your school inherent
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very
high
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standards and
they pass on same legacy to their students.

After completing my course, I can
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now
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many
dishes like
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buttrr
chicken,
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tikka
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paneer
etcetera, which is
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very
appreciated by my family.
Also
, I have
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now
planning to take orders for
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small
kitty parties and Birthday parties.

Your cookery school is
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
very
renowned and
is valued
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very
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highin
society.
However
, it would be great if you could
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start
a course on bakery and Indian deserts.

Waiting for your response.

Yours
Sincerely
,
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Jagpreet
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IELTS letter You recently did a short cookery course. The cookery school hsa asked foe your feedback on this course. Write a letter to your course director at the cookery school. In your letter. Describe what you enjoyed about thr course. Say how much cooking you have done since the couse. Suggest another cookery course you would like the school to offer.

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