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Writing task 1 You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. You would like to participate in a work-related seminar in another country. Write a letter to the person in charge of the seminar and ask for detailed information regarding the dates, program, accommodation and cost. You do NOT need to write any address. You should write at least 150 words

Writing task 1 You would like to participate in a work-related seminar in another country. Write a letter to the person in charge of the seminar and ask for detailed information regarding the dates, program, accommodation and cost. You do NOT need to write any address. pmG2
Dear Smith I am writing this in to get details about the seminar of 'Data Analysis' that is going to held in vancouver. My name is Peter and I am working in a multinational IT company as a project manager. I got to know about this seminar last week and I would like to participate in this. According to me this seminar will be very useful for me and my organization to know about latest techniques to be a good analyst. For this, I would like to get information about this like where it is going to happen and the dates. Moreover, I heard that you are also going to provide accomodation for attendant. Can you please send me the all details including the accomadation? where we will stay? Feel free to contact me via the same way. I look forward to hearing from you as soon. Yours sincerely Peter
Dear Smith

I am writing this in to
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get
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details
about the seminar of 'Data Analysis'
that is
going to
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held
in
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vancouver
. My name is
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Peter and
I am working in a multinational IT
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company
as a project manager. I
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got
to know about this seminar last week and I would like to participate in this.

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According to me
this seminar will be
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very
useful for me and my organization to know about
A determiner is probably missing here: "the latest".
latest
techniques to be a
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good
analyst. For this, I would like to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
get
information about this like where it is going to happen and the dates.

Moreover
, I heard that you are
also
going to provide
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accomodation
for attendant. Can you
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please
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send
me the all
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details
including the
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accomadation
?
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where
we will stay? Feel free to contact me via the same way.

I look forward to hearing from you as
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soon
.

Yours
sincerely


Peter

IELTS letter Writing task 1 You would like to participate in a work-related seminar in another country. Write a letter to the person in charge of the seminar and ask for detailed information regarding the dates, program, accommodation and cost. You do NOT need to write any address.

Letter
  American English
6 paragraphs
149 words
This writing has been penalized,
text can't be
less than 250 words in Task 2
and less than 150 words in Task 1
4.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
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