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A friend of yours is thinking of going on a camping holiday for the first time this summer. He/she has asked for your advice. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter, • explain why you think your friend would enjoy a camping holiday • describe some possible disadvantages • say whether you would like to go camping with your friend this summer

A friend of yours is thinking of going on a camping holiday for the first time this summer. He/she has asked for your advice. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter, • explain why you think your friend would enjoy a camping holiday • describe some possible disadvantages • say whether you would like to go camping with your friend this summer X6Vg
Dear Don, How are you and your family? It’s been ages since we were last in touch. I’m glad that you are asking for my advice regarding your summer camping holiday. In camping you will have to do hiking which was your favorite sports back in college. Additionally, you will meet with new people from different nationalities and cultures. I definitely encourage you to go. There are few disadvantages when you go for camping, I learned that on my camping vacation two years back. In camping you have to be careful while sleeping as you might have insects and probably snakes. Moreover, don’t expect cafes and restaurants you have to sort out your daily meals on your own. Last but not least, expect a poor internet coverage or no signal at all, it’s better to inform your family about it. I’d love to join you the camping holiday, but I’ve already planned and booked the flight to visit London with my wife to see her parents. Hope to meet you soon. Best Wishes, Alex
Dear Don,

How are you and your family? It’s been ages since we were last in touch. I’m glad that you are asking for my advice regarding your summer camping holiday. In
The comma is probably missing here: "camping, you".
camping you
will
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have to
The usual collocation for an activity ending in "-ing" is "go" not "do" or "play." Revise: "go hiking".
do hiking
which was your favorite sports back in college.
Additionally
, you will
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meet
with new
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people
from
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different
nationalities and cultures. I definitely encourage you to go.

There are few disadvantages when you go for camping, I learned that on my camping vacation two years back. In
The comma is probably missing here: "camping, you".
camping you
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
have to
be careful while sleeping as you might have insects and
probably
snakes.
Moreover
, don’t
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expect
'cafes' is an imported foreign expression, which originally has a diacritic. Consider using "cafés"
cafes
and restaurants you
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have to
sort out your daily meals on your
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own
. Last
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but
not least,
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expect
a poor internet coverage or no signal at all, it’s better to inform your family about it.

I’d
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love
to
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join
you the camping holiday,
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but
I’ve already planned and booked the flight to visit London with my wife to
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see
her parents.

Hope to
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meet
you
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soon
.

Best Wishes,

Alex
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IELTS letter A friend of yours is thinking of going on a camping holiday for the first time this summer. He/she has asked for your advice. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter, • explain why you think your friend would enjoy a camping holiday • describe some possible disadvantages • say whether you would like to go camping with your friend this summer

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  American English
7 paragraphs
173 words
5.5
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