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A friend of yours is thinking about for the same course that you did at university. He/She has ask for your advice about studying this subject

A friend of yours is thinking about for the same course that you did at university. He/She has ask for your advice about studying this subject dpeYK

Dear John, I am writing to respond to your asking about the financial study course you intend to apply for next month. I studied the same kind of class at MIT university last year. Its curriculum contains many subjects about finance, the stock market, and financial management. It taught me how to establish and run a business from basic to advance. In addition, I appreciated a lot of useful knowledge about stock and investment. At the end of the course, I must do a thesis for graduation and get the certification. From my point of view, MIT university is the best school for financial subjects because that is the school’s mainstream education. All teachers have been the top professors about the economy. Therefore, its reputation has been well-known all over the world. As a result, I believe that choosing this school is the best choice for those who study the economy. To get a successful application, I think you should prepare your application form carefully and provide a well-inform description of your education platform as well. I hope this response is useful for you. Yours faithfully, Jason Statham.

Dear John,

I am writing to respond to your asking about the financial study course you intend to apply for next
 month.

I studied the same kind of This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :coursetraining
class
 at MIT university last year. Its curriculum contains This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a plethora ofa number ofnumerous
many
 subjects about finance, the stock market, and financial management. It taught me how to establish and run a business from basic to advance. In addition
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 useful knowledge about stock and investment. At the This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :expiration
end
 of the course, I This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :require
must
 do a thesis for graduation and This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :acquire
get
 the certification.

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because
that is
 the school’s mainstream education. All teachers have been the top professors about the economy. Therefore
, its reputation has been well-known all over the world. As a result
, I believe that choosing this school is the best choice for those who study the economy.

To This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :acquire
get
 a successful application, I This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :reckonassumebelieveconsider
think
 you should prepare your application form carefully
 and provide a well-inform description of your education platform as well
.

I hope this response is useful for you.

Yours faithfully
,

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Statham
. 