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You have lost your student identification card. This has created some problems for you. Write a letter to the director of student services. In your letter advise them of your situation explain how this is affecting you request a new card

You have lost your student identification card. This has created some problems for you. Write a letter to the director of student services. In your letter advise them of your situation explain how this is affecting you request a new card ddXP
Dear Sir/Madam, I am writing this letter with regard to an lost identification card. I would like to know what is the process and the fees for a new card. I am Saga from the 2nd year who is studying in mechanical department, my old card number was ICSDF4589. My situations are bad in the recent time due to the loss of the old card. I am not sure where have I lost the card, but i discovered the loss quite late. I have been facing issues in different places because I don't have an identity card. Some of them are at the library, the cafe, the computer lab, and the book store. Although I was a well known person and a candidate with a good influence at the places I was not allowed to enter the room. I have been missing several meetings in the past two days. I would be grateful if you could issue me the card as soon as possible. If there are any other additional details or requirements please feel free to contact me anytime. Yours Sincerely, Saga
Dear Sir/Madam,

I am writing this letter with regard to
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lost identification
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card
. I would like to know what is the process and the fees for a new
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card
.
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I
am Saga from the 2nd year who is studying in mechanical department, my
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old
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card
number was ICSDF4589. My situations are
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bad
in the recent time due to the loss of the
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old
card.

I am not sure where have I lost the
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card
,
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discovered the loss quite late. I have been facing issues in
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different
places
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because
I don't have an identity
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card
.
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of them are at the library, the
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cafe
, the computer lab, and the book store. Although I was a well known person and a candidate with a
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good
influence at the places I was not
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allowed
to enter the room. I have been missing several meetings in the past two days.

I would be grateful if you could issue me the
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card
as
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soon
as possible. If there are any other additional
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details
or requirements
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please
feel free to contact me anytime.

Yours
Sincerely
,

Saga
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IELTS letter You have lost your student identification card. This has created some problems for you. Write a letter to the director of student services. In your letter advise them of your situation explain how this is affecting you request a new card

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  American English
6 paragraphs
182 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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