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A friend invited you to spend time with him on your next holiday, you are busy to accept the invitation. Write a letter to your friend.

A friend invited you to spend time with him on your next holiday, you are busy to accept the invitation. Write a letter to your friend. LxKp
I am writing you to thank you for the invite to spend my next holidays with you. Unfortunately, I would not be able to make it due to my busy schedule. Let me elaborate on my situation in more detail. As you know that I am busy preparing for my IELTS General Training examination, Unfortunately, I have scheduled my test date between my holidays before getting the invite from you. Moreover, I also have to give a medical examination as well which will take most of the days of my vacation. Do remember that visiting you for the holiday is still on my priority list, I would like your honest suggestion on it. My preference would be winter vacation as I will also be free in winter, specifically watching the snowfall, and going skating can be our main activity in order to enjoy the vacation. What do you think? Waiting for your reply soon. Yours sincerely,
I am writing you to thank you for the invite to spend my
next
holidays with you. Unfortunately, I would not be able to
make
it due to my busy schedule.

Let
me elaborate on my situation in more detail. As you know that I am busy preparing for my IELTS General Training examination, Unfortunately, I have scheduled my
test
date between my holidays
before
getting the invite from you.
Moreover
, I
also
have to
give a medical examination
as well
which will take most of the days of my vacation.

Do remember that visiting you for the holiday is
still
on my priority list, I would like your honest suggestion on it. My preference would be winter vacation as I will
also
be free in winter,
specifically
watching the snowfall, and going skating can be our main activity in order to enjoy the vacation. What do you
think
?

Waiting for your reply
soon
.

Yours
sincerely
,
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IELTS letter A friend invited you to spend time with him on your next holiday, you are busy to accept the invitation. Write a letter to your friend.

Letter
  American English
5 paragraphs
156 words
6.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
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    Include an introduction and conclusion
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    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 6.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 7.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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