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A friend has written a letter to you informing about his or her plan to visit your country/city. v.4

A friend has written a letter to you informing about his or her plan to visit your country/city. v. 4
Dear Norton, I am so delighted to receive your letter and writing back to say that I am fascinated to have you in my city in a few days. I cannot wait to receive you at the airport! I guess this is your first-time visit to Italy and I am sure you will enjoy your stay and take back some excellent memories. Once you finish your official tasks in Rome, you can spend a day or two there to enjoy the capital city, especially the Colosseum, Castel Sant'Angelo, St. Peter's Basilica, Trevi Fountain and the Pantheon. You can stay at the Hotel Palladium Palace if your accommodation is not already settled by your office. Then fly directly to Lucca, the city I am residing in. Give me a call before you reach the airport and I will be there. I would like you to stay at my place as long as you wish. If you insist on staying at a hotel, you can try Villa Corte Degli Dei or Hotel Napoleon. We will enjoy local food, watch a movie and do boating. We can enjoy scenic beauty every evening. I would recommend you to bring some warm clothes as the winter is setting in. Do not forget to bring your camera to capture the beauty of the rivers and traditional street views. Also, bring any medicines you take. Looking forward to having you in my city soon. Warm wishes, Marco
Dear Norton,

I am
so
delighted to receive your letter and writing back to say that I
am fascinated
to have you in my city in a few days. I cannot wait to receive you at the airport!

I
guess this is your
first
-time visit to
Italy and
I am sure you will
enjoy
your stay and take back
some
excellent memories. Once you finish your official tasks in Rome, you can spend a day or two there to
enjoy
the capital city,
especially
the Colosseum,
Castel
Sant
'Angelo, St. Peter's Basilica,
Trevi
Fountain and the Pantheon. You can stay at the Hotel Palladium Palace if your accommodation is not already settled by your office.

Then
fly
directly
to Lucca, the city I am residing in. Give me a call
before
you reach the airport and I will be there. I would like you to stay at my place as long as you wish. If you insist on staying at a hotel, you can try Villa
Corte
Degli
Dei
or Hotel Napoleon. We will
enjoy
local food,
watch
a movie and
do boating
. We can
enjoy
scenic beauty every evening.

I would recommend you to bring
some
warm clothes as the winter is setting in. Do not forget to bring your camera to capture the beauty of the rivers and traditional street views.
Also
, bring any medicines you take.

Looking forward to having you in my city
soon
.

Warm wishes,

Marco
3Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
4Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
9Mistakes
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IELTS letter A friend has written a letter to you informing about his or her plan to visit your country/city. v. 4

Letter
  American English
8 paragraphs
239 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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Task Achievement: 5.0
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