Dear Jonathan,
Hope you are doing great. I am very exhilarated to know that you will come to my city with your family next month. It is an excellent decision to visit Singapore during your children's school vacation and I am sure you all will enjoy your time.
After you reach my city, we can book tickets for Night Safari, Adventure Cove Park and Universal Studio. Those are quite popular among tourists and I have specifically selected them considering your children.
I would love to have you at my house. I have a large house and you will enjoy your privacy. However, if you would like to stay separate, my suggestion is Bukit Timah Road. So, book the Banana Leaf Hotel or Pandora Hotel if you must stay at a Hotel. But I insist that you stay at my place.
As I know, your princess daughter is only three years old. You should pack her food and suitable dresses for the summer. It is advisable to bring the necessary medicines as without a prescription, you won't be able to purchase any medicine from here.
See you at Changi Airport on the 28th of July.
With Best Regards
Efferen
Dear Jonathan,
Hope you are doing great. I am
very
exhilarated to know that you will
come
to my city with your family
next
month. It is an excellent decision to visit Singapore during your children's school
vacation and
I am sure you all will enjoy your time.
After you reach my city, we can book tickets for Night Safari, Adventure Cove Park and Universal Studio. Those are quite popular among tourists and I have
specifically
selected them considering your children.
I would
love
to have you at my
house
. I have a large
house
and you will enjoy your privacy.
However
, if you would like to stay separate, my suggestion is
Bukit
Timah
Road.
So
, book the Banana Leaf Hotel or Pandora Hotel if you
must
stay at a Hotel.
But
I insist that you stay at my place.
As I know, your princess daughter is
only
three years
old
. You should pack her food and suitable dresses for the summer. It is advisable to bring the necessary medicines as without a prescription, you won't be able to
purchase
any medicine from here.
See
you at
Changi
Airport on the 28th of July.
With Best Regards
Efferen
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