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A friend has written a letter to you informing about his or her plan to visit your country/city. v.3

A friend has written a letter to you informing about his or her plan to visit your country/city. v. 3
Dear Jonathan, Hope you are doing great. I am very exhilarated to know that you will come to my city with your family next month. It is an excellent decision to visit Singapore during your children's school vacation and I am sure you all will enjoy your time. After you reach my city, we can book tickets for Night Safari, Adventure Cove Park and Universal Studio. Those are quite popular among tourists and I have specifically selected them considering your children. I would love to have you at my house. I have a large house and you will enjoy your privacy. However, if you would like to stay separate, my suggestion is Bukit Timah Road. So, book the Banana Leaf Hotel or Pandora Hotel if you must stay at a Hotel. But I insist that you stay at my place. As I know, your princess daughter is only three years old. You should pack her food and suitable dresses for the summer. It is advisable to bring the necessary medicines as without a prescription, you won't be able to purchase any medicine from here. See you at Changi Airport on the 28th of July. With Best Regards Efferen
Dear Jonathan,

Hope you are doing great. I am
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very
exhilarated to know that you will
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
come
to my city with your family
next
month. It is an excellent decision to visit Singapore during your children's school
Use a comma before 'and' if it connects two independent clauses (unless they are closely connected and short).
vacation and
I am sure you all will enjoy your time.

After you reach my city, we can book tickets for Night Safari, Adventure Cove Park and Universal Studio. Those are quite popular among tourists and I have
specifically
selected them considering your children.

I would
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
love
to have you at my
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
house
. I have a large
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
house
and you will enjoy your privacy.
However
, if you would like to stay separate, my suggestion is
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Bukit
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Timah
Road.
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So
, book the Banana Leaf Hotel or Pandora Hotel if you
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
must
stay at a Hotel.
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
But
I insist that you stay at my place.

As I know, your princess daughter is
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
only
three years
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old
. You should pack her food and suitable dresses for the summer. It is advisable to bring the necessary medicines as without a prescription, you won't be able to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
purchase
any medicine from here.

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See
you at
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Changi
Airport on the 28th of July.

With Best Regards

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Efferen
3Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
0Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
5Mistakes
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IELTS letter A friend has written a letter to you informing about his or her plan to visit your country/city. v. 3

Letter
  American English
8 paragraphs
197 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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    Include an introduction and conclusion
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    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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