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A friend has agreed to look after your house pet while you are on holiday

A friend has agreed to look after your house pet while you are on holiday 6QL8

Dear Carya, I could not thank you enough for accepting favorable request, thank you for taking care of my pet. I will be away from home from April 1 to April 10, 2021 and you know my number you can always call me anytime if you need my help. By the way, here are some of the things you need to know about them. Bella loves to walk every morning; you can also feed her twice a day. She is picky and she only like to eat dog food so, please refrain from giving her a bone most of all the chicken bone as if she is allergic to that. At the same time while bella is asleep, you can also trim my succulent and give them a sprinkling water once a week. Love lots, Marie

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Carya
,

I could not thank you This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:abundance
enough
 for accepting favorable request, thank you for taking care of my pet. I will be away from home from April 1 to April 10, Some style guides suggest that commas should set off the year in a month-day-year date: "2021,".2021,
2021
 and you know my number you can always call me anytime if you need my This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :assistassistance
help
.

By the way, here are If the text is a generality, 'of the' is not necessary. Did you mean "some"?some
some of the
 things you need to know about them. Bella This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :admiresadores
loves
 to walk every morning; you can also
 feed her twice a day. She is Use a comma before 'and' if it connects two independent clauses (unless they are closely connected and short).picky, and
picky and
 she This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exclusively
only
 like to eat dog food This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:consequently
so
, This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :satisfy
please
 refrain from giving her a bone most of all the chicken bone as if she is allergic to that.

At the same time while Possible spelling mistake found.BellaBellbellbellsbellyElla
bella
 is asleep, you can also
 trim my succulent and give them a sprinkling water once a week.

This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :admireadore
Love
 lots,

Marie

IELTS letter A friend has agreed to look after your house pet while you are on holiday

Letter

American English

6 paragraphs

135 words

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less than 250 words in Task 2
and less than 150 words in Task 1

4.0

Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0

Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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One main idea per paragraph
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Include an introduction and conclusion
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Support main points with an explanation and then an example
Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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Vary your linking phrases using synonyms

Lexical Resource: 6.0

Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes

Grammatical Range: 6.0

Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
Check your writing for errors

Task Achievement: 5.0

Answer all parts of the question
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Present relevant ideas
Fully explain these ideas
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Support ideas with relevant, specific examples

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