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A friend has agreed to look after your house and pet while you are on holiday. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter give contact details for when you are away give instructions about how to care for your pet describe other household duties You do NOT need to write any addresses. Begin your letter as follows: Dear .....................,

A friend has agreed to look after your house and pet while you are on holiday. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter give contact details for when you are away give instructions about how to care for your pet describe other household duties You do NOT need to write any addresses. Begin your letter as follows: Dear. . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . , rxgn
Dear Chandler, Thank you so much for agreeing to take care of my dog, Pepper and my house while I am on my holiday in the Bahamas for a week. If you need to reach out to me, please do not hesitate to call me on my current mobile number. In case I am not reachable, please do leave a voicemail and I shall get back to you at the earliest possible. As you are aware, Pepper is only 3 months old, and she needs 4 meals in a day. I have kept each meal portion in a separate box and labelled them as well for your ease. Additionally, she will need water at all times, so please keep a water bowl in her room. While I am away, please water my plants everyday and vacuum the couch every alternate day. It would be great if you can come home a day before I leave so that you can get acquainted with Pepper. Look forward to seeing you. Warm Wishes Eesha
Dear Chandler,

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much for agreeing to take care of my dog, Pepper and my
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while I am on my holiday in the Bahamas for a week.

If you need to reach out to me,
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do not hesitate to call me on my
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current
mobile number. In case I am not reachable,
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do
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leave
a voicemail and I shall
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get
back to you at the earliest possible.

As you are aware, Pepper is
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only
3 months
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, and she needs 4 meals in a day. I have
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kept
each meal portion in a separate box and labelled them
as well
for your
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ease
.
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, she will need water at all times,
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so
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keep
a water bowl in her room.

While I am away,
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water my plants
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everyday
and vacuum the couch every alternate day.

It would be great if you can
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come
home a day
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before
I
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leave
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that you can
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acquainted with Pepper.

Look forward to seeing you.

Warm Wishes

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IELTS letter A friend has agreed to look after your house and pet while you are on holiday. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter give contact details for when you are away give instructions about how to care for your pet describe other household duties You do NOT need to write any addresses. Begin your letter as follows: Dear. . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . ,

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