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Last weekend, your cousin celebrated her 50th birthday, but you couldn't attend and you forgot to cancel. Write a letter to your cousin. In your letter: Apologize for missing the birthday celebration Explain why you missed it and why you hadn't let her know Describe how you will make it up to her.

Last weekend, your cousin celebrated her 50th birthday, but you couldn't attend and you forgot to cancel. Write a letter to your cousin. In your letter: Apologize for missing the birthday celebration Explain why you missed it and why you hadn't let her know Describe how you will make it up to her. em8O
Dear Mat, I hope this letter finds you in radiant health and good spirit. First of all congratulations on your 50th birthday, Please accept my apology for not being able to make my presence there. Let me explain my situation, An International Delegate came for observing our products in exhibition very same day, Therefore I really got wind up in preparing for them, consequently forgot to inform you regarding the absence. Regret my careless behavior. It has been long time since we met in person, More over would like to make it up to you by organizing a boutique lunch next week, On the other hand it will a nice opportunity to relive nostalgic memories of our time together. Looking forward to hearing from you. Yours Lovingly
Dear Mat,

I hope this letter finds you in radiant health and
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good
spirit.
This phrase is redundant. Consider using "first".
First of all
congratulations on your 50th birthday,
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
Please
accept my apology for not being able to
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make
my presence there.
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Let
me
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explain
my situation, An International Delegate came for observing our products in exhibition
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
very
same day,
Therefore
I
really
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
got
wind up in preparing for them,
consequently
forgot to inform you regarding the absence. Regret my careless behavior.

It has been long time since we met in person, More over would like to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
make
it up to you by organizing a boutique lunch
next
week,
On the other hand
it will a nice opportunity to relive nostalgic memories of our time together. Looking forward to hearing from you.

Yours
Lovingly
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IELTS letter Last weekend, your cousin celebrated her 50th birthday, but you couldn't attend and you forgot to cancel. Write a letter to your cousin. In your letter: Apologize for missing the birthday celebration Explain why you missed it and why you hadn't let her know Describe how you will make it up to her.

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  American English
4 paragraphs
126 words
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5.0
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Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0
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