Search
Vocabularying
Listening
Reading
1. Academic
2. General
Writing
1. IELTSWriting Checker
2. IELTS Writing Samples
Speaking

Do you want to improve your writing? Try our new evaluation service and get detailed feedback.

You have recently had a bad experience with Skylark Travels on a sight-seeing tour package of 15 days. Write to the travel company

Dear Sir/Madam, I feel recently unhappy to be writing to complain about the recent Singapore holidays tour I had with my family through your company. I had decided to be on your 15-day Singapore sight-seeing tour starting from 17th October only after being in a long consultation with your Tour Operations Manager who had claimed highly on your behalf, but it did not turn out the way it was promised to be. First of all, the hotel provided to us was below three-star level. To add to the discomfort, the seats in the tour bus had small and uncomfortable seats, which really made it very difficult for us to concentrate on sight-seeing. Moreover, some of the spots mentioned in the itinerary were left out from route. It was highly unexpected to receive this kind of service from a company of your standard. I find it dishonest and unacceptable that your company sold us a tour which did not fulfill the claims made. I hearby claims a 50% refund of the tour charges paid by me and expect your future tour packages to be much more better. Your faithfully, Riya Shah

Dear Sir/Madam, I feel recently unhappy to be writing to complain about the recent Singapore holidays You use this word too often, consider replacing it withtrekoutingexpeditiontravelswingtrip
tour
 I had with my family through your This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :enterprisecorporation
company
. I had decided to be on your 15-day Singapore sight-seeing You use this word too often, consider replacing it withtrekoutingexpeditiontravelswingtrip
tour
 starting from 17th October This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exclusively
only
 after being in a long consultation with your You use this word too often, consider replacing it withtrekoutingexpeditiontravelswingtrip
Tour
 Operations Manager who had claimed highly
 on your behalf, This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
but
 it did not turn out the way it was promised
 to be. Often, this adverbial phrase is redundant. Consider using “first”.First
First of all
, the hotel provided to us was below three-star level. To This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :accrue
add
 to the discomfort, the seats in the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withtrekoutingexpeditiontravelswingtrip
tour
 bus had This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:tiny
small
 and uncomfortable seats, which really
 made it This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:extremelyimmenselysupremelysuperb
very
 difficult for us to concentrate on sight-seeing. Moreover
, If the text is a generality, ‘of the’ is not necessary.some
some of the
 spots mentioned in the itinerary were This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :departed
left
 out from route. It was highly
 unexpected to receive this kind of service from a This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :enterprisecorporation
company
 of your standard. I find it dishonest and unacceptable that your This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :enterprisecorporation
company
 sold us a You use this word too often, consider replacing it withtrekoutingexpeditiontravelswingtrip
tour
 which did not fulfill the claims made. I Possible spelling mistake found.herebynearbytherebywherebyheresyhairy
hearby
 claims a 50% refund of the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withtrekoutingexpeditiontravelswingtrip
tour
 charges paid by me and This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :anticipate
expect
 your future You use this word too often, consider replacing it withtrekoutingexpeditiontravelswingtrip
tour
 packages to be much more better. Did you mean “Yours”? (complimentary close)Yours
Your
faithfully
, Possible spelling mistake found.RigaRitaOriyaRiyalRIARIMA
Riya
Please add a punctuation mark at the end of paragraph.Shah.Shah!Shah?Shah:Shah,Shah;
Shah