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A friend has agreed to look after your house and pet while you are on holiday. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter: - Give contact details for when you are away - Give instructions about how to care for your pet - Describe other household duties Write at least 150 words.

Dear Elena, Thank you for agreeing to help me out when I’m in Penang on holiday. I’m so grateful you could spare the time to take care of my pet rabbit, Bun Bun, and to look after my apartment when I’m away. I thought I’d write to you to give you some details about what I need you to do and to let you know how to contact me if you need to. You main task is to feed Bun Bun and to clean his litter tray daily. Bun Bun is fed once a day in the morning with the hay that is stored in the cupboard in my living room. You should give him five large handfuls of the hay, and fill his water bowl with fresh water from the kitchen sink. Besides that, it would be great if you could help me to empty the rubbish bin in the kitchen every day into the apartment’s waste collection bin in the room at the end of the corridor. If you need to contact me, my mobile phone will remain switched on throughout my holiday. Please don’t hesitate to call in case you need further information or run into difficulties when I’m away. See you soon at the end of the week! I promise to buy you lots of souvenirs from Penang. Love, Chris
Dear Elena,

Thank you for agreeing to
help
me out when I’m in
Penang
on holiday. I’m
so
grateful you could spare the time to take care of my pet rabbit,
Bun
Bun
, and to look after my apartment when I’m away. I
thought
I’d write to you to give you
some
details
about what I
need
you to do and to
let
you know how to contact me if you
need
to.

You
main task is to feed
Bun
Bun
and to clean his litter tray daily.
Bun
Bun
is fed
once a day in the morning with the hay that
is stored
in the cupboard in my living room. You should give him five large handfuls of the hay, and fill his water bowl with fresh water from the kitchen sink.

Besides
that, it would be great if you could
help
me to empty the rubbish bin in the kitchen every day into the apartment’s waste collection bin in the room at the
end
of the corridor.

If you
need
to contact me, my mobile phone will remain switched on throughout my holiday.
Please
don’t hesitate to call in case you
need
further
information or run into difficulties when I’m away.

See
you
soon
at the
end
of the week! I promise to
buy
you lots of souvenirs from
Penang
.

Love
,

Chris
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IELTS letter A friend has agreed to look after your house and pet while you are on holiday. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter: - Give contact details for when you are away - Give instructions about how to care for your pet - Describe other household duties

Letter
  American English
8 paragraphs
223 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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Lexical Resource: 5.0
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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Task Achievement: 5.0
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    Present relevant ideas
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