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You will visit a friend you have met last year.

Dear Francis, First of all I would like to thank you again for inviting me to your wedding this coming 30th of May. This will be my first time to visit Australia or commonly known as “down under. ” Luckily the plane ticket I have bought was on sale. I will be arriving at the 29th of May around seven in the morning. As part of our custom in our country, we need provide gift to your family for welcoming in Australia. Is a dog figurine will be a good suggestion? I remember this is one of collection your folks has in your living room. Since I am not familiar with weather in Australia, can you advice the appropriate clothes I have to bring. As I have mention to you over the phone, I plan to stay for another week after your wedding. This will be also my rest and recreation for this year. Could you advice visitor could do in your hometown? I am not sure if I have mention it to you, I finally started one of my bucket lists which to be a food vlogger. I recently uploaded three videos in my personal web page. Could you recommend popular restaurant in your town? I plan to create two or three videos while I am on vacation. Best Regards, Jaime Reyes.

Dear Francis,

Often, this adverbial phrase is redundant. Consider using “first”.First
First of all
 I would like to thank you again for inviting me to your wedding this coming 30th of May. This will be my first
 time to visit Australia or commonly
 known as “down under. ” Luckily the This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:aircraft
plane
 ticket I have This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :purchased
bought
 was on sale. I will be arriving at the 29th of May around seven in the morning. As part of our custom in our country, we need Make sure that ‘need provide’ is correct. If ‘need’ is a modal verb, the text is correct. If ‘need’ is a lexical verb, use “to provide”.to provide
provide
 gift to your family for welcoming in Australia. Is a dog figurine will be a This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :beneficialproduct
good
 suggestion? I remember this is one of collection your folks has in your living room.

Since I am not familiar with weather in Australia, can you Did you mean “advise” (verb) instead of advice (noun)?advise
advice
 the appropriate clothes I This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:ought to
have to
 bring. As I have mention to you over the phone, I plan to stay for another week after your wedding. This will be also
 my rest and recreation for this year. Could you Did you mean “advise” (verb) instead of advice (noun)?advise
advice
 visitor could do in your hometown?

I am not sure if I have mention it to you, I finally
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :initiated
started
 one of my bucket lists which to be a food vlogger. I recently uploaded three videos in my personal web page. Could you recommend popular restaurant in your town? I plan to create two or three videos while I am on vacation.

Best Regards,

Jaime Reyes. 