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You started a new language course a few weeks ago. Write an email to your friend explaining what you find easy and what you find difficult about learning English. Write bw 150 and 200 words.

Dear Valentina, I have started a new language course a few weeks ago. I extremely like it so far. The easiest part for me is speaking. We practice it a lot. The teacher is friendly, so you don't have to worry while you are talking to her. Once I had a conversation with her about animal rights. We talked for an hour long. It was an interesting debate! I started to use the language, when we were at England. Before that, I wasn't brave enough to talk. I have more confidence now, and I actually enjoy speaking in English with foreginers. Writing essays, and grammar is hard for me. Sometimes I mix the tenses, or miss words. This course is helping me, but I still should practice more. I know that if I study more, I will be better. But it's difficult to get motivated if you always do mistakes. Do you have any ideas wich can improve my writing skills? If you have, please let me know! Love, Bori
Dear Valentina,

I have
started
a new language course a few weeks ago. I
extremely
like it
so
far.

The easiest part for me is speaking. We practice it a lot. The teacher is friendly,
so
you don't
have to
worry while you are talking to her.
Once
I had a conversation with her about animal rights. We talked for an hour long. It was an interesting debate! I
started
to
use
the language, when we were at England.
Before
that, I wasn't brave
enough
to talk. I have more confidence
now
, and I actually enjoy speaking in English with
foreginers
.

Writing essays, and grammar is
hard
for me.
Sometimes
I mix the tenses, or miss words. This course is helping me,
but
I
still
should practice more. I know that if I study more, I will be better.
But
it's difficult to
get
motivated if you always do mistakes. Do you have any
ideas
wich
can
improve
my writing
skills
? If you have,
please
let
me know!

Love
,
Bori
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IELTS letter You started a new language course a few weeks ago. Write an email to your friend explaining what you find easy and what you find difficult about learning English. Write bw 150 and 200 words.

Letter
  American English
5 paragraphs
169 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
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    Include an introduction and conclusion
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    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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