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A local magazine editor has asked for readers opinions. Write a letter to the magazine editor Describe what made you choose this magazine What do you like and dislike about it What improvements do you want to see

Dear Sir/Madam, Thank you for soliciting readers view about your Magazine. I am writing to share my experience after reading your last month’s publication. Being an avid reader of various journals such as Readers Digest, Peoples Magazine and Buyers guide. I was searching for an interesting material to read during my last holiday. The cover page because of which I got attracted, became the reason for purchasing it. Although, there were several pictures of artifacts present. The feature I liked was the traditional furniture section. I particularly did not enjoy reading the article about transgenders in the opinions section. My suggestion is to publish family oriented content since most of your readership is in families. The opinion section can have interviews from famous personalities like musicians, popular actors or social workers. It will be great to see if continental food recipes are also printed often which will surely make it look much better. Thank you again for asking views of your subscribers. My best wishes for you and your team for a successful future. Yours faithfully, John Smith
Dear Sir/Madam,

Thank you for soliciting readers view about your Magazine. I am writing to share my experience after reading your last month’s publication.

Being an avid reader of various journals such as
Readers Digest
, Peoples Magazine and Buyers guide. I was searching for an interesting material to read during my last holiday. The cover page
because
of which I
got
attracted, became the reason for purchasing it.

Although
, there were several pictures of artifacts present. The feature I liked was the traditional furniture section. I
particularly
did not enjoy reading the article about transgenders in the opinions section.

My suggestion is to publish family oriented content since most of your readership is in families. The opinion section can have interviews from
famous
personalities like musicians, popular actors or social workers. It will be great to
see
if continental food recipes are
also
printed
often
which will
surely
make
it look much better.

Thank you again for asking views of your subscribers. My best wishes for you and your team for a successful future.

Yours
faithfully
,

John Smith
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IELTS letter A local magazine editor has asked for readers opinions. Write a letter to the magazine editor Describe what made you choose this magazine What do you like and dislike about it What improvements do you want to see

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6.0
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Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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