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You will visit a friend you have met last year.

Dear Laura, I have just returned home from an exciting trip to Australia and visiting the National Museum of Australia was one of the fabulous activities of this tour. I cannot wait to share my experience with you. We stayed in Australia for a week and on our second day, we went to the National Museum of Australia, located on Acton Peninsula, next to the Australian National University in Canberra. The museum's innovative use of new technologies is unprecedented. Initially, I thought that it's not going to be a fun time but to my surprise, I actually got fascinated by the fabulous collection the museum has. The Entrance and the interior blew my mind away. The museum's stunning architecture offered me an extraordinary opportunity to explore the rich and diverse stories of Australia and its people. From pre-colonial settlement to modern Australia, the museum has it all. The Pearling exhibition was excellent from a historical perspective. The museum is divided into 4 galleries and each has many glass cases filled with stories. The experience was stunning. I wish you had been with me there. I would absolutely recommend you visit this museum whenever possible. I would like to meet you soon and tell you stories about my tour. Take care. Yours truly,

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