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You saw an advertisement for a tennis course in England but you have one or two problems and can’t stay the whole course. Write a letter to the course director. In your letter, explain your interest in the course describe your problems find out if a refund is possible

Dear Sir, I am writing this letter in response to the advertisement on your website for a tennis court in England. I am fond of tennis since childhood as learning the same from one of the reputed institute of yours is like a dream come true. This help in acquiring different kind of skills, majorly, to hold the racket and as well as the technique of servicing. So, I enrolled myself without wasting a time. I am attended the training for four month, . Unfortunately, I met with a road accidents and doctor advice me to take complete bed rest coming 6 months. I am afraid about the duration of the course time because I am unable to join further. However, I would like to request you that if refund of my amount is possible after deduction the cost of my training held. I had already paid the entire fees in advance. This is a genuine situation and I cannot control neither will make out any way to join my dream project. Hope to hear a positive reply from you soon. Yours sincerely, Tara Sharma

Dear Sir,

I am writing this letter in response to the advertisement on your website for a tennis court in England.

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come
 true. This This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :assistassistance
help
 in acquiring This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:various
different
 kind of This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :proficiencies
skills
, majorly
, to hold the racket and as well
 as the technique of servicing. This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:consequently
So
, I enrolled myself without wasting a time.

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 the training for four Possible agreement error. The noun ‘month’ seems to be countable, so consider using: “months”.months
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 Unfortunately, I met with The plural noun “accidents” cannot be used with the article “a”. Did you mean “a road accident” or “road accidents”?a road accidentroad accidents
a road accidents
 and doctor advice me to take complete bed rest coming 6 months. I am afraid about the duration of the course time This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:due to the factin light of the fact thatowing to the fact that
because
 I am unable to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :consolidatefuse
join
further
.

However
, I would like to request you that if refund of my amount is possible after deduction the cost of my training held. I had already paid the entire fees in advance. This is a genuine situation and I cannot control neither will This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :createconstructmanufactureproduce
make
 out any way to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :consolidatefuse
join
 my dream project.

Hope to hear a This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:beneficial
positive
 reply from you This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:in the near future
soon
.

Yours sincerely
,

Tara Sharma