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You have lost an item of value on a train. Write a letter to the railway company. In your letter, describe the item, explain where and when you left it and say what action you would like the company to take.

Dear sir or madam, This is to report you the lost of an valuable item while I was travelling by train. I was on the carriage I AC department of the train. I was sleeping on my seat when this incident took place while I was travelling back to Woodsworth road from Canaught palace on 1st February between 1 pm to 4 pm. The wallet is brown in colour, it contains my PAN Card, voter identity card and my ATM card as well. Particularly, those are my essential IDs which I am in need now. The Waller must be there on my seat no. 48. Please do look around the areas properly it must be lying there. If your team finds any information about my wallet, you can contact me on 987654434 immediately. I would make arrangements to collect it on your earlier convenience. I am eagerly waiting for your positive response on my case. I would be immensely grateful for your urgent response. Yours sincerely Mohin
Dear sir or madam, This is to report you the lost of
an
valuable item while I was travelling by train.

I was on the carriage I AC department of the train. I was sleeping on my seat when this incident took place while I was travelling back to
Woodsworth
road from
Canaught
palace on 1st February between 1 pm to 4 pm. The wallet is
brown in colour
, it contains my PAN Card, voter identity card and my ATM card
as well
.
Particularly
, those are my essential IDs which I am in need
now
. The Waller
must
be there on my seat no. 48.
Please
do look around the areas
properly
it
must
be lying there.

If your team finds any information about my wallet, you can contact me on 987654434 immediately. I would
make
arrangements to collect it on your earlier convenience. I am
eagerly
waiting for your
positive
response on my case.
I
would be
immensely
grateful for your urgent response.

Yours
sincerely
Mohin
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IELTS letter You have lost an item of value on a train. Write a letter to the railway company. In your letter, describe the item, explain where and when you left it and say what action you would like the company to take.

Letter
  American English
4 paragraphs
165 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.0
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Task Achievement: 5.0
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    Present relevant ideas
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