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A friend has agreed to look after your house and pet while you are on holiday.  Write a letter to your friend. In your letter • give contact details for when you are away • give instructions about how to care for your pet • describe other household duties

A friend has agreed to look after your house and pet while you are on holiday.  Write a letter to your friend. In your letter • give contact details for when you are away • give instructions about how to care for your pet • describe other household duties AbqN
Dear Mahesh, I would like to express the joy and want to be thankful on your readiness, to care for my pet dog Tommy and house in my vacation period. However, considering the fact of new enviornment which dogs generally do noy accliamatize with agilty, I am communicating few suggestions to handle Tommy as well as the house. Firstly, Tommy recognises voices over phone very easily and in addition my contacts details would certainly helpful for any unusual situation. 8010329939 is recently changed in number which can be dialed evenif I would be abroad. Comming to heart of the matter, I always maintain the fixed-schedulde for my pet in terms of the hygeine and food habbits. Please try to take him atleast once in a day to park so that he can do his natures calls followed by bath with the soaps that i am going to handover you along with the pet food. The pet food is the one he likes most. Importantly, House which is close to my heart needs a meticluous attention. As this is far away from the crowded place of the city, need to be careful always. You can track the post box and just drop me an email in case water, gas or electricty bills pope up. In case you are out for your short term activities, do not forget the to close all uitilities and to lock the main as well as entrance gate. I know these duties may sound extra burden on your office activities, but as you are working from home would be managable. I look forward to hear from you egarley and meet you soon. Best reagrds, Manish
Dear Mahesh,

I would like to express the joy and want to be thankful on your readiness, to care for my pet dog Tommy and
house
in my vacation period.
However
, considering the fact of new
enviornment
which dogs
generally
do
noy
accliamatize
with
agilty
, I am communicating few suggestions to handle Tommy
as well
as the
house
.

Firstly
, Tommy
recognises
voices over phone
very
easily
and
in addition
my contacts
details
would
certainly
helpful for any unusual situation. 8010329939 is recently
changed
in number which can
be dialed
evenif
I would be abroad.

Comming
to heart of the matter, I always maintain the
fixed-schedulde
for my pet in terms of the
hygeine
and food
habbits
.
Please
try to take him
atleast
once in a day to park
so
that he can do his natures calls followed by bath with the soaps that
i
am going to handover you along with the pet food. The pet food is the one he likes most.

Importantly
,
House
which is close to my heart needs a
meticluous
attention. As this is far away from the crowded place of the city, need to be careful
always
. You can
track
the post box and
just
drop me an email in case water, gas or
electricty
bills pope up. In case you are out for your short term activities, do not forget the to close all
uitilities
and to lock the main
as well
as entrance gate. I know these duties may sound extra burden on your office activities,
but
as you are working from home would be
managable
.

I look forward
to hear
from you
egarley
and
meet
you
soon
.

Best
reagrds
,

Manish
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IELTS letter A friend has agreed to look after your house and pet while you are on holiday.  Write a letter to your friend. In your letter • give contact details for when you are away • give instructions about how to care for your pet • describe other household duties

Letter
  American English
8 paragraphs
277 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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