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A friend has agreed to look after your house and pet while you are on holiday.  Write a letter to your friend. In your letter • give contact details for when you are away • give instructions about how to care for your pet • describe other household duties

A friend has agreed to look after your house and pet while you are on holiday.  Write a letter to your friend. In your letter • give contact details for when you are away • give instructions about how to care for your pet • describe other household duties 7jm2
Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing to report the loss of a valuable personal item on one of your trains. The item is a small black leather wallet with the brand name ‘Urban Limit’ embossed on the front. Inside was a library card, a credit card, a swipe card for the gym, a student I. D. card and my driver’s licence – all in my name. There was also a little cash: about $25 in all. I must have lost the wallet between 4. 15 pm and 4. 30 pm while travelling southbound on the Wyndham Line on Friday afternoon (15th May). If I recall correctly, I was in the second carriage sitting near the front. Could you please let me know if a wallet of this description has been found. My phone number is 099 304 2442. If you have it, please keep it in a safe place and I will make arrangements to collect it at your earliest convenience. Thank you. Yours faithfully, Joe Black
Dear Sir or Madam,

I am writing to report the loss of a valuable personal item on one of your trains.

The item is a
small
black leather wallet with the brand name ‘Urban Limit’ embossed on the front. Inside was a library
card
, a credit
card
, a swipe
card
for the gym, a student I. D.
card
and my driver’s
licence
all in my name. There was
also
a
little
cash: about $25 in all.

I
must
have lost the wallet between 4. 15 pm and 4. 30 pm while travelling southbound on the Wyndham Line on Friday afternoon (15th May). If I recall
correctly
, I was in the second carriage sitting near the front.

Could you
please
let
me know if a wallet of this description has
been found
. My phone number is 099 304 2442. If you have it,
please
keep
it in a safe place and I will
make
arrangements to collect it at your earliest convenience.

Thank you.

Yours
faithfully
,

Joe Black
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IELTS letter A friend has agreed to look after your house and pet while you are on holiday.  Write a letter to your friend. In your letter • give contact details for when you are away • give instructions about how to care for your pet • describe other household duties

Letter
  American English
8 paragraphs
167 words
6.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
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    Include an introduction and conclusion
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    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 6.0
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  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.5
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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