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A friend has agreed to look after your house and pet while you are on holiday. Write a letter to your friend. v.9

A friend has agreed to look after your house and pet while you are on holiday. Write a letter to your friend. v. 9
Dear Scarlet, Thank you for agreeing to look after my house and my dog - Chi Chi. During my holiday, I will be staying with my sister in our ancestral house in Vigan. Feel free to ring me on my mobile number if you need me for anything. I wrote my address in Vigan and my mobile number on a sticky note which I've left on the kitchen door. My dog needs to be fed twice a day - each morning and evening. I've placed enough food for him in a white jar inside a kitchen cabinet. You just need to mix a cup of dog food and a cup of milk and pour it into his bowl. Apparently, you can take him outside each evening for a walk. Finally, make sure that he drinks plenty of fresh water every day. Kindly water the pants in the living room every other day. Besides, unplug electronic appliances and turn off the water source each night. Lastly, for security reasons, make sure that the doors and windows are locked inside and the outside lights are on at night. Thank you so much once again. I'm looking forward to seeing you when I return. Warm wishes, Arlyn
Dear Scarlet,

Thank you for agreeing to look after my
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
house
and my dog
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Chi Chi. During my holiday, I will be staying with my sister in our ancestral
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
house
in
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Vigan
. Feel free to ring me on my mobile number if you need me for anything. I wrote my address in
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Vigan
and my mobile number on a sticky note which I've
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
left
on the kitchen door.

My dog needs to
be fed
twice a day
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-
each morning and evening. I've placed
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
enough
food for him in a white jar inside a kitchen cabinet. You
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
just
need to mix a cup of dog food and a cup of milk and pour it into his bowl.
Apparently
, you can take him outside each evening for a walk.
Finally
,
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
make
sure that he drinks
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plenty
of fresh water every day.

Kindly water the pants in the living room every other day.
Besides
, unplug electronic appliances and turn off the water source each night.
Lastly
, for security reasons,
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
make
sure that the doors and windows
are locked
inside and the outside lights are on at night.

Thank you
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so
much once again. I'm looking forward to seeing you when I return.

Warm wishes,

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Arlyn
2Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
0Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
5Mistakes
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IELTS letter A friend has agreed to look after your house and pet while you are on holiday. Write a letter to your friend. v. 9

Letter
  American English
7 paragraphs
203 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
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    Include an introduction and conclusion
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    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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