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Write a letter to your grandmother to apologize for not getting in touch with her

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Dear Grandmother, I hope you are doing well. I apologize for not getting in touch with you, the reason why I have not been able to talk to you because I've been busy with my studies for the past few months. I have got so many assignments and projects to work on. Most of the time I am in the library or my dorm room researching and studying. My studies are getting harder day by day, I have to focus a lot for my exams and most of the days I do not have any free time for myself. It will take me a few more months to complete my studies but I suppose I can arrange time with you anytime sooner. Can we meet at your place this weekend or next weekend? Please write back to me as soon as possible. Looking forward to receive a letter from you. Best Regards, Your GranddaughterEmma
Dear Grandmother,

I hope you are doing well. I apologize for not getting in touch with you, the reason why I have not been able to talk to you
because
I've been busy with my studies for the past few months.
I
have
got
so
many
assignments and projects to work on. Most of the time I am in the library or my dorm room researching and studying. My studies are getting harder day by day, I
have to
focus a lot for my exams and most of the days I do not have any free time for myself. It will take me a few more months to complete my studies
but
I suppose I can arrange time with you anytime sooner.

Can we
meet
at your place this weekend or
next
weekend?
Please
write back to me as
soon
as possible.

Looking forward
to receive
a letter from you.

Best Regards,

Your
GranddaughterEmma
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IELTS letter Write a letter to your grandmother to apologize for not getting in touch with her

Letter
  American English
6 paragraphs
153 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 6.0
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  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
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    Present relevant ideas
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