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A friend from another country is moving to your city for work. He / she has asked you for advice about living in your city. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter suggest an interesting part of the city to live in describe the public transport in your city say how your friend can meet new people there

A friend from another country is moving to your city for work. He / she has asked you for advice about living in your city. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter suggest an interesting part of the city to live in describe the public transport in your city say how your friend can meet new people there n2mo
Hello Aman, Happy to hear that you are moving to my city Amritsar, Punjab. People are here very loveable, and we treat a guest as a God. The most interesting thing about my city is that there is a Golden Temple which serves the world’s largest community meal each day. I always go there when I want a piece of mind. And it is very famous for many kinds of Punjabi food, clothes, and other accessories. Moreover, public transportation is well managed and provides quick service you do not have to wait for a long time you can catch a bus within every 15 minutes. My other friends are also excited for you and they already organize a welcome party for you. They always provide good respect, courage and do well behave with new people. I am sure they will not give you any chance of complaint. With lots of love your friend Amanpreet Kaur
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Happy to hear that you are moving to my city Amritsar, Punjab.
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loveable, and we treat a guest as a God. The most interesting thing about my city is that there is a Golden Temple which serves the world’s largest community meal each day. I always go there when I want a piece of mind. And it is
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kinds of Punjabi food, clothes, and other accessories.
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wait for a long time you can catch a bus within every 15 minutes.

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excited for you and they already organize a welcome party for you. They always provide
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good
respect, courage and do well behave with new
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. I am sure they will not give you any chance of complaint. With lots of
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your friend

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IELTS letter A friend from another country is moving to your city for work. He / she has asked you for advice about living in your city. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter suggest an interesting part of the city to live in describe the public transport in your city say how your friend can meet new people there

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  American English
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154 words
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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 6.0
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Grammatical Range: 6.0
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Task Achievement: 5.0
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