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A friend from another country is moving to your city for work. He / she has asked you for advice about living in your city. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter suggest an interesting part of the city to live in describe the public transport in your city say how your friend can meet new people there

A friend from another country is moving to your city for work. He / she has asked you for advice about living in your city. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter suggest an interesting part of the city to live in describe the public transport in your city say how your friend can meet new people there kVRO
Hi Jam, Glad to hear that you are moving to my city Amritsar, Punjab. Individuals are here incredibly loveable, and we treat a visitor as a God. The most intriguing thing about my city is that there is a Golden Temple which serves the world's biggest local area feast every day subsequently, I generally go there when I need a piece of my brain. What's more, it is massively notable for various sorts of Punjabi food, garments, and different adornments. Additionally, public transportation is very much overseen and offers fast support you don't should hang tight for quite a while you can get transport inside at regular intervals. Then again, my different companions are likewise energized for you, and they as of now coordinate an inviting party for you. They generally give great regard, fortitude and do well carry on with new individuals. Ultimately, I am certain they won't give you any possibility of grumbling. In any case! I can not hold back to see you. With bunches of affection your companion Sandeep
Hi Jam,

Glad to hear that you are moving to my city Amritsar, Punjab. Individuals are here
incredibly
loveable, and we treat a visitor as a God. The most intriguing thing about my city is that there is a Golden Temple which serves the world's biggest local area feast every day
subsequently
, I
generally
go there when I need a piece of my brain. What's more, it is
massively
notable for various sorts of Punjabi food, garments, and
different
adornments.
Additionally
, public transportation is
very
much overseen and offers
fast
support you don't should hang tight for quite a while you can
get
transport inside at regular intervals.

Then again, my
different
companions are
likewise
energized for you, and they as of
now
coordinate an inviting party for you. They
generally
give great regard, fortitude and do well carry on with new individuals.
Ultimately
, I am certain they won't give you any possibility of grumbling. In any case! I can not hold back to
see
you.

With bunches of affection your companion

Sandeep
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IELTS letter A friend from another country is moving to your city for work. He / she has asked you for advice about living in your city. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter suggest an interesting part of the city to live in describe the public transport in your city say how your friend can meet new people there

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  American English
5 paragraphs
172 words
6.5
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Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0
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Lexical Resource: 6.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.0
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Task Achievement: 7.0
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