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Your local council is considering closing a sports and leisure centre that it runs, in order to save money. Write a letter to the local council. In your letter - [ ] Give details of how you and your friends or family use the centre - [ ] Explain why the sports and leisure centre is important for the local community - [ ] Describe the possible effects on local people if the centre closes

Your local council is considering closing a sports and leisure centre that it runs, in order to save money. Write a letter to the local council. In your letter - [ ] Give details of how you and your friends or family use the centre - [ ] Explain why the sports and leisure centre is important for the local community - [ ] Describe the possible effects on local people if the centre closes 3eA5

Dear Sir/Madam, I am writing this letter to show my concern for considering the closing of a sports and leisure centre. As a member of this centre I just want to suggest you that closing the centre is not a good idea because it affect many people in different ways. Me and my family we have taken a membership of this centre for the complete year. I used to visit the sports centre with my cousins to work my fitness as well as sports skills. The coaches in these centre are very experienced. My grandpa used to visit the leisure centre daily for some relaxation. As we all know nowadays sports has become an important part of every individual’s life. Young generation needs some extra time for sports apart from studies and you are also aware that this sports and leisure centre is very close to our community. If you close these centres then how will they spend there free in time in doing extra circular activities. Once the centre get closed then no one will be able to meet their friends. They always lock themselves in their homes. Old people becomes sick. Hope you understand my concern and will think again before making any kind of decision. Yours Faithfully Surbhi

Dear Sir/Madam,

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 we all know nowadays You use this word too often, consider replacing it withfunathleticspastimegame
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 aware that this You use this word too often, consider replacing it withfunathleticspastimegame
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 then how will they spend there free in time in doing extra circular activities.

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Hope you understand my concern and will This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :reckonassumebelieveconsider
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 again This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:previouslyprior to
before
 making any kind of decision.

Yours Faithfully


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