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Although you have never formally studied computing, you have always been interested in computers. You have just read about a computer course that really interests you, but it is only for people who have completed an elementary course. Write a letter to the college enrolment officer. In your letter explain why you are writing describe your circumstances ask if a special exception can be made for you so you can enrol in the course

Although you have never formally studied computing, you have always been interested in computers. You have just read about a computer course that really interests you, but it is only for people who have completed an elementary course. Write a letter to the college enrolment officer. In your letter explain why you are writing describe your circumstances ask if a special exception can be made for you so you can enrol in the course 9o7r
Dear Officer, I am writing to you regarding the new cloud computing course which is starting from next month for students interested in programming. I would be greatful, if I could be a part of this course, even though, I am aware that it is particularly for people who have completed an elementary course. I believe, my interest towards computers has always helped me to learn more and more about coding and programming. I have been a part of multiple online olympiads where I have acheived good ranking. Moreover, I am also working as a freelancer where I have to work on small coding projects independently. The knowledge I have gained so far is from the textbooks and online content as I really enjoy reading and later implementing on different tools to challenge my skills. I would really apreciate, if I could get a chance to enroll myself in this course as an exception. I would be happy to go through an evaluation level test if required. I look forwards to hearing back from you. Yours Faithfully Prachi
Dear Officer,

I am writing to you regarding the new cloud computing course which is starting from
next
month for students interested in programming. I would be
greatful
, if I could be a part of this course,
even though
, I am aware that it is
particularly
for
people
who have completed an elementary course.

I
believe, my interest towards computers has always
helped
me to learn more and more about coding and programming.
I
have been a part of multiple online
olympiads
where I have
acheived
good
ranking.
Moreover
, I am
also
working as a freelancer where I
have to
work on
small
coding projects
independently
. The knowledge I have gained
so
far is from the textbooks and online content as I
really
enjoy reading and later implementing on
different
tools to challenge my
skills
.

I would
really
apreciate
, if I could
get
a chance to enroll myself in this course as an exception. I would be happy to go through an evaluation level
test
if required.

I
look forwards to hearing back from you.

Yours
Faithfully


Prachi
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IELTS letter Although you have never formally studied computing, you have always been interested in computers. You have just read about a computer course that really interests you, but it is only for people who have completed an elementary course. Write a letter to the college enrolment officer. In your letter explain why you are writing describe your circumstances ask if a special exception can be made for you so you can enrol in the course

Letter
  American English
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177 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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