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You’ve seen the notice below in a newspaper. Write an email to the newspaper about higher Internet speeds. Mention their importance for:

You’ve seen the notice below in a newspaper. Write an email to the newspaper about higher Internet speeds. Mention their importance for: 7lJb
Dear Sir/Madam, Through the column of your esteemed newspaper, I wish to share my opinion on the high-speed internet which is very essential in our city. Firstly, in this pandemic situation everybody was working from home, due to high capacity usage of internet it was taking much time for downloading and uploading the files from office server. In the present days, most of the people are using cashless transfers for purchasing goods. Numerous Students are attending their online classes through the internet, which is affecting their studies due to a lack of proper high-speed internet connections. These are the various problems we facing in our city It’s a big privilege for me to be a part of contributing my ideas to your newspaper. I hope my letter will be taken into account Yours faithfully Sandeep
Dear Sir/Madam,

Through the column of your esteemed newspaper, I wish to share my opinion on the high-speed internet which is
very
essential in our city.

Firstly
, in this pandemic situation everybody was working from home, due to high capacity usage of internet it was taking much time for downloading and uploading the files from office server. In the present days, most of the
people
are using cashless transfers for purchasing
goods
. Numerous Students are attending their online classes through the internet, which is affecting their studies due to a lack of proper high-speed internet connections. These are the various problems
we facing
in our
city


It’s a
big
privilege for me to be a part of contributing my
ideas
to your newspaper. I hope my letter will
be taken
into
account


Yours
faithfully


Sandeep
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IELTS letter You’ve seen the notice below in a newspaper. Write an email to the newspaper about higher Internet speeds. Mention their importance for:

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  American English
6 paragraphs
134 words
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5.0
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Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0
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Lexical Resource: 6.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.0
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Task Achievement: 5.0
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