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Recently you saw an article in a newspaper/journal about a city/town you know and some of the information in the article was incorrect. Write a letter to the editor regarding this. In your letter, you should tell: how you know about this city/town what information was incorrect what the editor should do about this.

Recently you saw an article in a newspaper/journal about a city/town you know and some of the information in the article was incorrect. Write a letter to the editor regarding this. In your letter, you should tell: how you know about this city/town what information was incorrect what the editor should do about this. qXer
Dear Sir/Madam, With reference to your journal in The Times dated, 01-March-2021, I would like to bring this to your urgent notice that the article about Delhi water supply has misleading information and some of the facts are wrongly presented I was born and raised in Delhi. I had closely worked with the Delhi water supply department for a few years in most of Delhi's region. Also, I have lived in this city all my life and understand its basic problem In the article, it has been presented that Block A to F of Tilak Nagar areas do not have any government administered water supply. However, these colonies have an effective water system. It would be great if you do more research specifically on the aforementioned areas and in your next article you can highlight the corrected part in bold text. If you need any information specific to these areas then do not hesitate to contact me. Yours faithfully, Chakshu Madan
Dear Sir/Madam,

With reference to your journal in The Times dated, 01-March-2021, I would like to bring this to your urgent notice that the article about Delhi
water
supply has misleading information and
some of the
facts are
wrongly
presented

I
was born
and raised in Delhi. I had
closely
worked with the Delhi
water
supply department for a few years in most of Delhi's region.
Also
, I have
lived
in this city all my life and understand its basic problem

In the article, it has
been presented
that Block A to F of
Tilak
Nagar areas do not have any
government
administered
water
supply.
However
, these colonies have an effective
water
system.

It would be great if you do more research
specifically
on the aforementioned areas and in your
next
article you can highlight the corrected part in bold text.

If you need any information specific to these areas then do not hesitate to contact me.

Yours
faithfully
,

Chakshu
Madan
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IELTS letter Recently you saw an article in a newspaper/journal about a city/town you know and some of the information in the article was incorrect. Write a letter to the editor regarding this. In your letter, you should tell: how you know about this city/town what information was incorrect what the editor should do about this.

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  American English
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160 words
6.0
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