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Your local council is considering closing a sports and leisure centre that it runs, in order to save money. Write a letter to the local council. In your letter - [ ] Give details of how you and your friends or family use the centre - [ ] Explain why the sports and leisure centre is important for the local community - [ ] Describe the possible effects on local people if the centre closes

Your local council is considering closing a sports and leisure centre that it runs, in order to save money. Write a letter to the local council. In your letter - [ ] Give details of how you and your friends or family use the centre - [ ] Explain why the sports and leisure centre is important for the local community - [ ] Describe the possible effects on local people if the centre closes aNq9

Dear Sir/Madam, My name is Surbhi Jain and I am writing this letter to raise my concern regarding the idea of closing the local sports and leisure centre. For most of the local people this has became a point to meeting with each other. These centres provide a healthy atmosphere for the children. Everyone used to visit several times in a week to share some positive emotions with each other. My family used to came here several times in a week. My husband and I used to attend the fitness session for adults on Monday and Friday. My sons came here after school for doing their homework in a particular section and play with other children in this safe environment. We came every weekend to do some sports activities in order to maintain our fitness. I think closing these centres will have a negative impact on many people. Firstly, those who used to play sports will now avoid playing it this will affect their fitness along with there interest in sports. Children start roaming in the street which is not at all a safe and healthy place for them. Secondly, old people will start visiting the parks which are far away from our locality this will be a concern for their family members. These centres are just 350 miles away from our local community. Kindly give your close consideration on these questions. Yours faithfully Surbhi

Dear Sir/Madam,

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Surbhi
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Jain and
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idea
 of closing the local You use this word too often, consider replacing it withfunathleticspastimegame
sports
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centre
. For most of the local This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :individualsnationsociety
people
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became
 a point to meeting with each other. These Possible spelling mistake. 'centres' is British English.centers
centres
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used
 to visit several times in a week to share This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a number of
some
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positive
 emotions with each other.

My family This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exploited
used
 to came here several times in a week. My husband and I This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exploited
used
 to attend the fitness session for adults on Monday and Friday. Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
My
 sons came here after school for doing their homework in a particular section and play with other children in this safe environment. We came every weekend to do This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a number of
some
You use this word too often, consider replacing it withfunathleticspastimegame
sports
 activities in order to maintain our fitness.

I This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :reckonassumebelieveconsider
think
 closing these Possible spelling mistake. 'centres' is British English.centers
centres
 will have a This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:adverse
negative
 impact on This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a plethora ofa number ofnumerous
many
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :individualsnationsociety
people
. Firstly
, those who This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exploited
used
 to play You use this word too often, consider replacing it withfunathleticspastimegame
sports
 will This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :nowadays
now
 avoid playing it this will affect their fitness along with there interest in You use this word too often, consider replacing it withfunathleticspastimegame
sports
. Children This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :initiate
start
 roaming in the street which is not at all a safe and healthy place for them. Secondly
, This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:ancientagedmature
old
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :individualsnationsociety
people
 will This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :initiate
start
 visiting the parks which are far away from our locality this will be a concern for their family members. These Possible spelling mistake. 'centres' is British English.centers
centres
 are This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:merely
just
Writing for an international audience? Consider adding the metric equivalent.350 miles (ca. 563 km)350 miles (563.27 km)350 miles (ca. 563 kilometers)350 miles (563.27 kilometers)350 miles (ca. 563,270 m)350 miles (563,270.4 m)
350 miles
 away from our local community.

Kindly give your close consideration on these questions.

Yours faithfully


Possible spelling mistake found.SushiSurahSurahs
Surbhi