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A friend from abroad is visiting your country next month. She is planning to stay with you but you can’t accommodate him. Write a letter to him. In you ld letter 1. Tell her the reasons. 2. Apologie. 3. Make alternative arrangements.

A friend from abroad is visiting your country next month. She is planning to stay with you but you can’t accommodate him. Write a letter to him. In you ld letter 1. Tell her the reasons. 2. Apologie. 3. Make alternative arrangements. MRlQ

Dear Pankaj, I was overjoyed when I came to know that you are planning a trip to India, and you have planned to stay with me, but when I came to know your itinerary, I felt sad. My father’s open-heart surgery has been planned in those days and so I will not be at home. I am writing this letter to apologise you for my inability to accommodate you during that time. My father had pain in chest last week for which we got an aniography done. He has blockagesin two arteries of the heart and as he is diabetic, he is not fit for angioplasty. So he needs a bypass surgery and will need hospilitization for at least three weeks. If it is possible for you to postpone your trip then I will be able to accommodate your. But if in case you need to come in those days then alternatively, my cousin Drashti, who is in Delhi would accommodate during those days and she would be happy to show you around. Do let me know at your earliest, so that I can communicate with my cousin accordingly. Hoping to hear from you soon. Yours lovingly, Vishal

Dear Pankaj, I was overjoyed
 when I came to know that you are planning a trip to India, and you have planned to stay with me, This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
but
 when I came to know your itinerary, I felt sad. My father’s open-heart surgery has been planned
 in those Use a comma before 'and' if it connects two independent clauses (unless they are closely connected and short).days, and
days and
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:consequently
so
 I will not be at home. I am writing this letter to Possible spelling mistake. 'apologise' is British English.apologize
apologise
 you for my inability to accommodate you during that time.

My father had pain in chest last week for which we This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :acquired
got
 an Possible spelling mistake found.angiography
aniography
 done. He has Possible spelling mistake found.blockage sinblockages in
blockagesin
 two arteries of the heart and as he is diabetic, he is not fit for angioplasty. This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:consequently
So
 he needs a bypass surgery and will need Possible spelling mistake found.hospitalization
hospilitization
 for at least three weeks.

If it is possible for you to postpone your trip then I will be able to accommodate your. This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
But
 if in case you need to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :approacharrive
come
 in those days then alternatively
, my cousin Possible spelling mistake found.Drastic
Drashti
, who is in Delhi would accommodate during those Use a comma before 'and' if it connects two independent clauses (unless they are closely connected and short).days, and
days and
 she would be happy to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :demonstrateportrayindicatedisplay
show
 you around.

Do This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :authorize
let
 me know at your earliest, This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:consequently
so
 that I can communicate with my cousin accordingly
.

Hoping to hear from you This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:in the near future
soon
.

Yours lovingly
, Vishal