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I am writing to ask for more information about your cooking class. I am especially interested in Sushi. I am 42 and I work in Sweden. I want to travel to your country for learning Thai food. I hope that I have free time to visit your beautiful country. I have looked up your website, but there is no information about Sushi. could you please send me information about the date and price? I would also like some information about accommodation. If possible, I would like to stay with my husband. he will be coming with me. sincerely

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