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In my informal letter about my native land.

In my informal letter about my native land. 53YYe

I do hope this letter wild find you in good health and spirits. I'm really glad that you will come country. I can describe native land for you. For instance, In our country it is stuated between two graet rivers. The Amu-Daryo, The Syer-Daryo. Also it's mineral reasorces such as oil, gold, gaz, cooper, and so on. Well, Just give me a call if you have any question left. Can you introduce in your family or best friend. I can promise for you. To introduce you my country, national meals, widely applicable markets and the most famous museums. Since you will play the national games with my friend.

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good
 health and spirits. I'm really
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come
 country. Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
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 can This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :characterizeportray
describe
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Just
 give me a call if you have any question This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :departed
left
. Can you introduce in your family or best friend. I can promise for you. To introduce you my country, national meals, widely
 applicable markets and the most This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:well-known
famous
 museums. “Since” at the beginning of a sentence usually requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
Since
 you will play the national games with my friend. 