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There is a public event coming up in your town. Write a letter to your friend who you think would be interested to take part in it. In your letter – Describe the event. – why you think he/she would be interested – Suggest an arrangement to meet with him/her at the event.

There is a public event coming up in your town. Write a letter to your friend who you think would be interested to take part in it. In your letter – Describe the event. – why you think he/she would be interested – Suggest an arrangement to meet with him/her at the event. DloNo
Hi Dear Aashi, I am delighted to write down that the acting skill competition will be held in my colony next week. A number of participants from different -different cities will take part in this, like every year, the authority team, however, will distribute the prices as per the acts. This competition is not minting money, as well as the purpose is to enhance the acting skills into the already talented people. The first runner up will get a free tour for Switzerland so you can guess, how much patronage and benefits a winner can achieve just by performing awesomely. I am aware that you are too much into acting, as you have given numerous auditions -brings you success- for theatre, television, and radio. You are an exuberant person to be a part of this kind of activity. Consequently, I personally believe that this occasion is not a ubiquitous opportunity for you to grab. You, therefore, should check all the details about it on the following official website https/: bseh. org. in to fill the form prior. As this event will be in the area which is not far from my home, I would love to meet you – The majestic hotel, timingS 09: 00 AM- 05: 00 PM- for a shorter time. Without an iota of doubt, you will be occupied with various things that day, so I would not take a very long time of your busy schedule. Moreover, the event will begin at 10: 00 am, so we can meet before 10: 00 AM. We’ll have a cup of coffee there. You’re loving, Mishi Rana
Hi Dear
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Aashi
, I
am delighted
to write down that the acting
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skill
competition will
be held
in my colony
next
week. A number of participants from
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different
-
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different
cities will
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
take part
in this, like every year, the authority team,
however
, will distribute the prices as per the acts. This competition is not minting money,
as well
as the purpose is to enhance the acting
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
skills
into the already talented
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
people
. The
first
This word is normally spelled with hyphen.
runner up
will
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get
a free tour for Switzerland
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
so
you can guess, how much patronage and benefits a winner can achieve
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just
by performing
awesomely
. I am aware that you are too much into acting, as you have
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
given
numerous auditions -brings
Do not use a noun immediately after the pronoun 'you'. Use a verb or an adverb, or possibly some other part of speech.
you success
- for
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theatre
, television, and radio. You are an exuberant person to be a part of this kind of activity.
Consequently
, I
personally
believe that this occasion is not a ubiquitous opportunity for you to grab. You,
therefore
, should
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
check
all the
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
details
about it on the following official website
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https
/:
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bseh
.
This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
org
.
This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
in
to fill the form prior. As this
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event
will be in the area which is not far from my home, I would
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
love
to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
meet
you
Consider using an m-dash if you do not want to join two words.
–
The majestic hotel,
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timingS
09: 00 AM- 05: 00 PM- for a shorter time. Without an iota of doubt, you will
be occupied
with various things that day,
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
so
I would not take a
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
very
long time of your busy schedule.
Moreover
, the
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
event
will
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begin
at 10: 00 am,
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so
we can
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meet
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
before
10: 00 AM. We’ll have a cup of coffee there. You’
The verb 'loving' is a stative verb and sometimes the progressive form is not correct. Try a simple form instead.
re loving
,
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Mishi
Please add a punctuation mark at the end of paragraph
Rana
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IELTS letter There is a public event coming up in your town. Write a letter to your friend who you think would be interested to take part in it. In your letter – Describe the event. – why you think he/she would be interested – Suggest an arrangement to meet with him/her at the event.

Letter
  American English
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267 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
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  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
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    Present relevant ideas
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