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A complaint about a refrigerator you bought

A complaint about a refrigerator you bought G2gQ

Dear Mr. Patrick, I am writing to make a complain about the black double door refrigerator i bought from your outlet at ikeja on the 14th of march 2020 at about 2: 30 pm on friday. On getting home that day, after unpacking it I noticed the refrigerator did not come with an adoptor and when it was plugged to electricity with a normal voltage it immediately started sparking which made my husband to quickly remove. Hence we did not try it again in order not to cause more damages to the already faulty item. I would like to seek you delivery team check it up on the address stated on the my receipt on the date of purchase and if possible make a refund according to your company's policy or proffer a quick and possible solution because we are in need of a refrigerator to store my already purchased perishable goods for my new wholesale business. Thank you for your time and anticipation of your quick responseYours sincerely, Nikeolise Rita

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 a The word 'complain' is a verb. Did you mean the noun "complaint"?complaint
complain
 about the black double door refrigerator Is this the personal pronoun "I"? It is spelled uppercase.I
i
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :purchased
bought
 from your outlet at Possible spelling mistake found.IKEA
ikeja
 on the 14th of The month "March" needs to be capitalized.March
march
 2020 at about 2: 30 pm on Possible spelling mistake found.FridayFridays
friday
. On getting home that day, after unpacking it I noticed the refrigerator did not This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :approacharrive
come
 with an Possible spelling mistake found.adaptoradopteradopt or
adoptor
 and when it was plugged
 to electricity with a normal voltage it immediately This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :initiated
started
 sparking which made my husband to quickly
 remove. Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?Hence,
Hence
 we did not try it again in order not to cause more damages to the already faulty item. I would like to seek you delivery team This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :monitor
check
 it up on the address stated on A determiner cannot combine with a possessive pronoun. Did you mean simply "my receipt" or "the receipt"?my receiptthe receipt
the my receipt
 on the date of This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :acquire
purchase
 and if possible This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :createconstructmanufactureproduce
make
 a refund according to your This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :enterprisecorporation
company
's policy or proffer a quick and possible solution This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:due to the factin light of the fact thatowing to the fact that
because
 we are in need of a refrigerator to store my already This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :acquired
purchased
 perishable This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :productscommoditiesmerchandises
goods
 for my new wholesale business. Thank you for your time and anticipation of your quick Possible spelling mistake found.
responseYours
sincerely
, Possible spelling mistake found.LikewiseNikolas
Nikeolise
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