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A Company Offers a temporary job without salary.however, it helps you to gain some work experience .write a letter to the friend .In your letter , Your should :(1)introduce your work experience.(2) say which department you want to work to(3) give you expectations for the job.

A Company Offers a temporary job without salary. however, it helps you to gain some work experience. write a letter to the friend. In your letter, Your should: (1)introduce your work experience. (2) say which department you want to work to(3) give you expectations for the job. bbmNQ
Dear Jay, Hope you are doing well in yourlife. I am studying for a Master's degree in the field of Computer Science andApplication from a Canadian University. Recently, I became aware of ashort-term job related to programmer in Python at your company and I’mwriting to ask for your support in taking this occupation. As you know, I have completed mygraduation in Computer Science and also have two years of experience in theprogramming field. While the Information Technology field is a vast and fastgrowing industry, it is needed to keep updated with this. In addition, becauseof my master's studies, I am looking for a temporary job to enhance my knowledgeof the ongoing market. I want to work as a programmer as I already haveexperienced this. And I can only work during the afternoons and at weekends as Ineeded to allocate my university studies as well. Your company operates in theinternational market, so it provides enormous awareness about InformationTechnology and would like to furnish my skills as per industry standards. Andexperience earned from your organization will shape my future for better workopportunities. Awaiting your reply.  Yours sincerely,  Aarti Jani
Dear Jay, Hope you are doing well in
yourlife
. I am studying for a Master's degree in the field of Computer Science
andApplication
from a Canadian University. Recently, I became aware of
ashort-term
job related to programmer in Python at your
company
and I’
mwriting
to
ask for
your support in taking this occupation. As you know, I have completed
mygraduation
in Computer Science and
also
have two years of experience in
theprogramming
field. While the Information Technology field is a vast and
fastgrowing
industry, it
is needed
to
keep
updated with this.
In addition
,
becauseof
my master's studies, I am looking for a temporary job to enhance my
knowledgeof
the ongoing market. I want to work as a programmer as I already
haveexperienced
this. And I can
only
work during the afternoons and at weekends as
Ineeded
to allocate my university studies
as well
. Your
company
operates in
theinternational
market,
so
it provides enormous awareness about
InformationTechnology
and would like to furnish my
skills
as per industry standards.
Andexperience
earned from your organization will shape my future for better
workopportunities
. Awaiting your reply.  Yours
sincerely
,
 
Aarti
Jani
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IELTS letter A Company Offers a temporary job without salary. however, it helps you to gain some work experience. write a letter to the friend. In your letter, Your should: (1)introduce your work experience. (2) say which department you want to work to(3) give you expectations for the job.

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  American English
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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Task Achievement: 5.0
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