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There is a problem in your street. Write a letter to the local town council explaining who you are, what the problem is and what you expect from them.

There is a problem in your street. Write a letter to the local town council explaining who you are, what the problem is and what you expect from them. Wygnq
Dear Sir/Madam, My name is Sarah Roberts, and I am writing to you regarding a tree that fell on Martin Street, York, on 4th March. For the reason of the last storm, we had a lot of damages in our neighborhood. Specifically, a tree that fell, and it is being blocked on the road. The episode happened on the right-hand side of the street. More specific in front of house 508, Martin Street. In the day that occurred the issue, I called the fire department immediately, but have not had any success. I completely understand they are very busy, also there are many issues all over the city. However, it has been almost a week and the problem was not solved yet. I would be grateful if you could send the maintenance to remove the tree by the end of this week. I look forward to hearing from you. Yours faithfully, Sarah Roberts.
Dear Sir/Madam,

My name is Sarah Roberts, and I am writing to you regarding a tree that fell on Martin Street, York, on 4th March.

For the reason of the last storm, we had
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
a lot of
damages in our neighborhood.
Specifically
, a tree that fell, and it is
being blocked
on the road. The episode happened on the right-hand side of the street. More specific in front of
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
house
508, Martin Street.

In the day that occurred the issue, I called the fire department immediately,
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
but
have not had any success. I completely understand they are
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
very
busy,
also
there are
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
many
issues all over the city.
However
, it has been almost a week and the problem was not solved
yet
.

I would be grateful if you could
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
send
the maintenance to remove the tree by the
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
end
of this week.

I look forward to hearing from you.

Yours
faithfully
,

Sarah Roberts.
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IELTS letter There is a problem in your street. Write a letter to the local town council explaining who you are, what the problem is and what you expect from them.

Letter
  American English
8 paragraphs
153 words
7.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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Lexical Resource: 6.5
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Grammatical Range: 7.0
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Task Achievement: 7.0
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