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You received electricity bills but it is too high because of wrong meter reading. Write to the concern person and explain the problem.

You received electricity bills but it is too high because of wrong meter reading. Write to the concern person and explain the problem. aw7l9
Dear Sir/Madam, Greetings! I have received the monthly gas bill for the last quarter from April to June and I would like to inform you that I have been overcharged for this period. I have noticed that the meter reading in the bill and the actual reading in the meter has a huge difference, and this is why the bill was stating the high charges. And also this is happening for second time, the first time I was not able to make a complaint because I was out of country and my landlord had to make the payment on my behalf. However, I understand that this is happening because the meter is located inside the compound and the gate would be locked all the time when I am out. So, I believe the meter reader had come to my house while I was out so he/she would have not been able to come in and check the actual meter reading since the gate would have been locked. I apologies for the inconvenience caused and I would like to make a request to you to consider this letter as on urgent basis and send the meter reader once again to check the actual meter reading and change the monthly bill for the last quarter. This would be very much helpful to me, I will look forward to hearing a favorable response from you soon. Thanks and regards, Karthik
Dear Sir/Madam,

Greetings!

I have received the monthly gas
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bill
for the last quarter from April to June and I would like to inform you that I have
been overcharged
for this period. I have noticed that the
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meter
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reading
in the
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bill
and the actual
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reading
in the
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meter
has a huge difference, and this is why the
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bill
was stating the high charges. And
also
this is happening for second time, the
first
time I was not able to
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make
a complaint
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because
I was out of country and my landlord had to
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make
the payment on my behalf.

However
, I understand that this is happening
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because
the
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meter
is located
inside the compound and the gate would
be locked
all the time when I am out.
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So
, I believe the
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meter
reader had
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come
to my
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house
while I was out
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so
he/she would have not been able to
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come
in and
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check
the actual
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meter
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reading
since the gate would have
been locked
.

I
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apologies
for the inconvenience caused and I would like to
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make
a request to you to consider this letter as on urgent basis and
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send
the
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meter
reader once again to
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check
the actual
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meter
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reading
and
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change
the monthly
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bill
for the last quarter. This would be
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very
much helpful to me, I will look forward to hearing a favorable response from you
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soon
.

Thanks and regards,

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Karthik
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IELTS letter You received electricity bills but it is too high because of wrong meter reading. Write to the concern person and explain the problem.

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